Reviewer: laceymoibella
Date: 12/14/07 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

I thought your story was well written from Draco's POV. I got to feel the inner conflct he was experiencing over becoming part of the Dark Lord's followers. As well as the tumult of emotions concerning his understanding that the muggleborns that he was supposed to despise, had done nothing warranting the deaths that were bestowed upon them.

Super piece of writing!

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