Reviewer: GinnyPotter1824
Date: 04/17/13 6:29
Chapter: The Room Without a Door

More please.

Reviewer: Cassandra Lane
Date: 04/14/12 16:04
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

Fanfuckingtastic !

Reviewer: Felix Felishus
Date: 10/26/09 21:53
Chapter: Colour Haze

This is a very nice chapter. Good Job!

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/28/09 19:11
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

i'm very sorry for your missfortune and i am deffinitly sorry i was so harsh, i didn't want to be but i was just so darn mad cuz this story has great potential. well good luck and i will keep reading, i think i'm going to wait until its completely finished though, b/c i have read the other chapters SO many times to get back into the groove of it that i feel like i've read them a million times! haha. so i think i'm going to wait until its finished and then read it all together. but i really do like the story! and again i am sorry if i came off as a b*tch

Author's Response: It's alright. I appreciate your comments. They gave me even more of a reason to get my chapters out faster.

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/28/09 17:43
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

three months? idk why i said that. haha its been like three years! i guess i just looked at the date and not the year. haha. so yeah jan. of 07!!!! omg!

Author's Response: I understand what you mean, and I understand your disappointment with how slowly the story is being posted and I am so glad that you have chosen to keep reading it anyway and commenting anyway. But please understand that it is not caused by my lack of interest in my story. I love my story but things happen. I posted the first two chapters up pretty quickly and I was amazed by how people responded to it. But then I was homeless for about six months and unable to write. That's why chapter three took forever to post. And then I had to make up for the time I missed in school because I was kicked out and try to make it into college at my expected time. But then I got chapter four in at about August or September of last year I believe, and I felt like I was able to write more speedy chapters but then chapter five was delayed I think like two months because of beta problems. I was being really silly because I saw that my beta hadn't responded in all that time and I wanted to wait it out because I like my beta and I didn't want to change. But I finally felt that it was ridiculous to wait so I found some else to beta and finally the chapter was posted. I have finally reached a place where I have more time to myself so that I am able to write my chapters quicker and post them. I have been writing the sixth chapter and it will definitely be up next month. I do want to get this story over with because it has been far too long and I have ideas for other stories. I really hope that you will continue to read GFW. It's so long because I really wanted it to seem like it was apart of the series and I think you will like how it turns out. The chapters will be coming more quickly in the future. Thanks you so much for your comments.

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/28/09 17:39
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

(last time i swear) also nothing in your summary as even happened yet! i suppose b/c they are not officially back at hogwarts that those things are going to start happened but see what i mean? i've been reading this story for... roughly 3 months. and nothing you used to draw my attention has even happened. see what i mean about slow paced? i hope this all helps and does not discourage you. b/c this story has great potential. JUST WRITE IT ALREADY! haha

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/28/09 17:34
Chapter: The Room Without a Door

well i've already commented. but i just want to kind of... give you some insite. you're story moves very slowly, and updating twice a year does not help. i suggest you either pick up the pace a bit in the story or start updating regularly. i understand we all have hecktic schedules but if you are going to post something updating more regularly is only proper manners. i am sorry if you see this as being mean or rude. i am simply trying to help you, i have noticed that you get fewer and fewer reviews on your chapters and they are not by the same people anymore. i feel like i'm the only one even reading your story anymore. and honestly... i don't see why i still am, it seems you have lost your whole point to the story. maybe updating more often would help but honestly the plot is very slow and drawn out and there are way to many loose ends and twists. again i do not intend to hurt your feelings. i am just trying to help!!

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/25/09 23:05
Chapter: The Room Without a Door

oooooh interesting. hope you update soon

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 03/12/09 3:03
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

Author's Response: Sorry to have kept you waiting! But There should be a post very soon, no later than next week.

that was like two months ago. did something happen?

Author's Response: I'm sorry, but yes something did happen. I was having beta problems, but now I am happy to say that the next chapter is in the queue and I hope that you will enjoy!

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 01/27/09 3:57
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

well you already know what i'm going to say. haha please update. if you're going to have a cliffhanger you have to update!

Author's Response: Sorry to have kept you waiting! But There should be a post very soon, no later than next week.

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 01/18/09 16:26
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

:( its been so long since an update... did you give up on the story?

Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 08/21/08 18:56
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

Great! I am so please that I get to beta a story as good as this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 06/02/08 18:32
Chapter: Gracefully Fallen Parcel


with sprinkles and cherries and chocolate syrup and whipped cream and whatever else you like ontop!!!!!!

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 05/22/08 0:24
Chapter: Gracefully Fallen Parcel

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!!!! i really want to know where it's going. it's so well written and i am sooo hooked. please update soon. i know you are probably getting it to us as fast as you can. i just want to let you know that i really like your story

Author's Response: Then you will be happy to know that the next chapter is in the queue waiting for validation! I am so sorry I write so slowly!! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!

Reviewer: Krue
Date: 05/10/08 0:09
Chapter: Gracefully Fallen Parcel

Its a grate story so far. I cant wait to see what happens.

10 out of 10

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 03/21/08 17:37
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

YaY! I'm excited to see an update. ..... Now I have to re-read everything so that I can remember what this is all about. But from reading my old reivews, I'm sure I''ll be intrigued all over again!

Author's Response: Lol. I'm so sorry for the wait! You shouldn't have to wait that long again... hopefully. And just so you know I am writing the next chapter as we speak! THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!!!

Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 08/22/07 0:51
Chapter: Questionable Fancy

when are you going to update? i love the story!! you've got me hooked

Author's Response: Soon. I promise. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!!

Reviewer: SkivingSnackbox13
Date: 08/06/07 21:17
Chapter: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

finsih now, or ill kill you. but no pressure! ;)

nah jk! its really good. i like it alot! im excited to read the rest. you are a really good write, the story is VERY convincing!

Author's Response: So I am a convincing lier. . . . this is an acheivement with no bounds! LOL! Just kidding. Thank you so much. I'm so glad you appreciate it! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!!

Reviewer: CaptainWinky
Date: 07/10/07 2:06
Chapter: Questionable Fancy

Omfg I love it
Your writing stlye is awesome- and the whole Draco Ron dilema adds a good twist

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad I've caught your attention. So I am going to try really hard to keep it. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!

Reviewer: mshadows
Date: 06/16/07 7:59
Chapter: Questionable Fancy

aww i started reading this only two chapters in! sadness! anyways im fairly interested, please continue. though this is harry/draco, i'm actually sort of interested in why harry is taking a liking to ron, and why ron is showing so much interest. it's sorta cute, please continue you're an excellent writer!

Author's Response: It won't be much longer before I update. I'm sorry for keeping you waiting. I'm sooo happy you enjoy my story. And I never said whether it was a Harry/Draco or Harry/Ron or Harry/someone else. Ha! And the plot thickens. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!!

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