Well, you have captured the very essence of your characters as they truly are in the original stories. I can assure you of that. But I have one question though, where are you going with this? I am curious as to the nature of the future of this work because even though this is a great piece, I only see filler for the original story, so I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I wrote this for the Challenge, so I honestly don't know if I'm going to go any further with this piece. Any of my pieces have the potential to become something bigger. You've given me food for thought - I may have a plot bunny hopping my way now!