Reviews For Sleep
Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/15/07 9:04
Chapter: Sleep

Cool, I really liked this take on Lucius. You make him much more human than most fics, but without actually making him OOC. I love how he just accepts his fate, making him human, and weak in his own way, but how he despises weakness. It's really brilliantly put together, and shows a side to Lucius that we never have seen, but that is still realistic!

Reviewer: Sileny
Date: 01/28/07 12:36
Chapter: Sleep

Wow. That was a great story. I love how you make the characters that are often seen as walking evil into feeling humans. I often have to sigh at people who portray the infamous characters of Harry Potter as people who loved death and pain. You were perfect at describing Lucius. Keep writing!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/28/07 0:08
Chapter: Sleep

VERY good. I almost feel sorry for Lucius, and I thought the scene with baby Draco was especially touching. The part wiith Draco crying himself to sleep after he cast a silencing spell was good too. You make them human, though not quite likeable. An excellent job, and well written. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 01/27/07 20:24
Chapter: Sleep

*clap, clap, clap*


This was wonderful. I absolutly loved it! There were so many wonderful one-liners. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Lucius. This was just great! I don't know what else to say.

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