Cool, I really liked this take on Lucius. You make him much more human than most fics, but without actually making him OOC. I love how he just accepts his fate, making him human, and weak in his own way, but how he despises weakness. It's really brilliantly put together, and shows a side to Lucius that we never have seen, but that is still realistic!
Wow. That was a great story. I love how you make the characters that are often seen as walking evil into feeling humans. I often have to sigh at people who portray the infamous characters of Harry Potter as people who loved death and pain. You were perfect at describing Lucius. Keep writing!
VERY good. I almost feel sorry for Lucius, and I thought the scene with baby Draco was especially touching. The part wiith Draco crying himself to sleep after he cast a silencing spell was good too. You make them human, though not quite likeable. An excellent job, and well written. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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This was wonderful. I absolutly loved it! There were so many wonderful one-liners. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Lucius. This was just great! I don't know what else to say.