Really good fic!
Wow. That makes sense. That really makes sense. I love reading a story with a good twist to it.
whoa! this story is really amazing. i told all of my friends to read it. i like peter stories but they are really rare so its nice to read one thats so good.
Wow, that was wonderful. It makes everything fit. Not only why Wormtail went bad, but also why Voldermort gave Lilly a chance to live.
I am very impressed with your writing style as well.
Wow, great fic.
Never had thought of wormtail like that.