Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/18/07 4:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

she's tried to read it, and she just hates it! *gasp*


Author's Response: Well, the first book starts off a little bit slow... maybe she would like to listen to the books on tape? My brother and sister listened to me read the books because they had trouble concentrating reading them themselves.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/17/07 21:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

i'm back! and guess what, I DIDN'T DIE!!!
actually, it went very, VERY well in both Western and Jumping. Unbelievable, isn't it?
anyway, i printed this story and gave it to one of my friends (the one who doesn't like HP, and she happens to be the same one i gave th Dark Lord's Blog to. and she loved it, by the way), and she absolutely adored it! :D


Author's Response: Not so unbelievable! I knew you'd do a great job! And I'm so flattered that your friend liked this story. Tell her to read Harry Potter, and that it's way better than my stories!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 02/17/07 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

oh wow. that was great. prophetic dreams... like the creepy kind, i know what thats like. nice story!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, Zimmy! I've had so many creepy dreams that I couldn't let a challenge like this pass me by.

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 02/17/07 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

HAH! That shows him! getting exactly what he deserves in a sort-of ironic way

~zimmy

Author's Response: Hee, that was the intention of the story, so I'm glad it worked out!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 02/17/07 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Well OBVIOUSLY flatware is two-dimensional, and silverware is very shiny... and... uh... silver.

Actually, I think flatware is silverware with those plasticky handle thingies... you probably have no idea what I'm talking about, but oh well. This is so odd that I'm just writing this random review about the difference between flatware and silverware...

Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/16/07 19:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

HAIRNET!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
delightful. i would really, REALLY love a sequel "draco's diary" or something like that. it would be fantastic!
THE FLATWARE IS MINE!!!!! *insert evil laugh*

okay, see ya later. i'm going to my doom now. horse competition:
Western riding - Barrel Racing.
Horse jumping - with obstacles around 100-130 cm.
I'M GONNA DIE!!!!! :S :O
seriously, i'm not very confident on jumping. this i'll be quite frighening... SEE YA! :D

Author's Response: Ooh, horse-riding! Good luck! I adore horses, but I'm not very good with them.

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 02/16/07 16:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

oooh!!!! Great ending!!! And I luv the references to fish!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 02/16/07 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Very Good! Keep up the good work, even if u aren't continuing this story-- although it would be cool if u did! WRITE MORE!!!! GO U! Ok i love ur stories, keep writing!

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I will definitely keep writing. I'm not continuing THIS story, but there MAY POSSIBLY be a sequel from Draco's point of view.

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 02/16/07 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Oh. My. Gawd. THIS STORY IS SOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think u have 2 be the best author ever. Seriously.

*and since it was all a "dream", I WANT THAT FLATWARE! And if not the flatware, THE SILVERWARE!!!!!!!!!!*

(Gah! Where did my first post go??? *sob*)

Author's Response: Thanks, Alias_Tonks!!!!! I'm really, really flattered! You can't see (unless you're some creepy stalker or something) that I'm blushing. Does anyone know the difference between "flatware" and "silverware?" I always thought they were the same thing.... hmmm...

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 02/16/07 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

'The Redemption of Lucius Malfoy.' I love this chapter. It's short and to the point. And what a point!

Quite nicely done! I want this to win the Dreams thingy, really I do. (And this has nothing to do with me not having my own submission, although I'm thinking about entering).

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Zoheb. I always appreciate your opinions on my stories, and since this was a really nice opinion, I appreciate it a lot! I hope it wins, too, and this has everything to do with it being my own submission. ^_^ It would be cool if you entered, though

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 02/16/07 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Wow. That was funny, serious, poignant, sad, funny.... That was an awesome chapter, Schmergo. I'm sort of sad to see this story end so soon, but I can see why you ended it where you did.

I think you did a wonderful job of dealing with Lucius learning that he had killed his own sister. It was heartwrenching, yet not so long and drawn out as to detract from the rest of the story. You kept just enough humor in there to keep the tone light (and remind us that you were indeed the author). It was fantastic. It's the little things like Mr. Cook and Mr. Butler that really make a story, and you're doing a wonderful job with them.

"...he’d always flaunted his 99.44% pure heritage." Is this by chance a reference to the old Ivory soap commercials? Just curious.

Take care!

♫We are the pirates who don't do anything...♫ :-)

Author's Response: Thanks very much, nuw! I was thinking of writing a longer sequel that's the diary of Draco forced to cope with living a Muggle life (because they're undercover), but I'm not sure if I will. I'm so busy with so many stories floating around in my head! Yep, that was totally a reference to the Ivory soap commercials. It was originally just 100% pure, but then I got this evil little idea... I adore veggie tales, by the way.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/16/07 7:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! GREAT I LOVE IT!!!! FANASTIC!!!! *happy jig*

finally, the second chapter is up! one could wonder what Cissy and Draco did when they found out about this. i think.... yes, Cissy chased Lucius around the house with her wand, fiering hexes all over the place... oh, probably wearing a pink, frilly nightgown and a hairnet. Draco would of course be sitting under the kithen table (with a blanket and a teddybear), crying in despair of being half mudblood.
I'M SO MEAN!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D

""DING-DONG!
He jumped about two feet in the air in manner very closely resembling a chicken with its tail feathers aflame.
“Oh, Salazar!” he swore under his breath, pulling himself together. Stupid, blasted Muggle contraptions, doorbells.""
perfect for the situation, really funny

"“Strange name,” said Mrs. MacHamish, shaking her head. “But each to his own. I used to have an uncle named Elizabeth.”"
how do you even come up with these things? it's hilarious!

I LOVE ALL YOUR STORYS SCHMERGO! THIS CHAPTER WAS THE GREATEST!! :D :D :D :D :D

Author's Response: I was actually thinking about writing a sequel that's sort of a diary from Draco's point of view of the family forced to live as Muggles... but I'm not sure if I'll ever write it honestly. Your image of Cissa and Draco made me laugh out loud. A HAIRNET, AHAHAHA! As for Uncle Elizabeth, my friend owns a male cat named Elizabeth because he thought it was a girl when he first got it. That's where I got the idea. I'm glad you liked this chapter, Madelynn!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 02/12/07 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! I PWN ALL OF YOU! (except, of course, you, Schmergo, because you wrote the story to which I am the first reviewer...)

PS: Now if I could only READ the chapter...

Author's Response: You win! ^_^

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 02/12/07 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

I would TERRIBLY love to see the next bit of this chapter, especially because I'm reading The Haunting of Alaizabel Cray and I need something absolutely hilarious to distract me from the creepiness, and you are just about the only writer who has ever made my family rush into the room looking alarmed as I make rather unattractive chokey noises just to make them walk away in disgust because of how hard I'm laughing...

But seriously! This is almost as bad as the wait for The Dark Lord's Blog! (Which, by the way, I am still waiting for a sequel to!)

Author's Response: Ha, thanks! The next chapter should be up fairly soon... as for a sequel to the Blog, I'm still waiting for inspiration, so I'm afraid that won't be as soon as I'd expected. But I'll have a few more pieces up within the next month for sure!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/11/07 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

i think i'm going to be sick. but yes, since i really hate snape, it'll be a good story... you give me more and more ideas, i really think i'll write this.

i hope the next chapter gets validates soon! can't wait!!!

Author's Response: I hope it gets validated soon, too!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 02/11/07 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

In which our hero is terrorized by a doorbell... ooohhh... who is the hero? Harry or Lucius?

Author's Response: Our hero is definitely Lucius in this story. Harry doesn't even make an appearance at all! This chapter will prove very, er, interesting.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/10/07 21:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Trewy=Makeover... hehehehe... yes, i'm getting more and more interested in writing one....

Author's Response: And maybe she could have gotten the makeover and stuff so Professor Snape would notice her! *Doubles over wheezing with laughter imagining the expression on Snape's face when Trelawney starts hitting on him*

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 02/10/07 17:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Dont worry... the ship isn't Wmt/Vdm.
Oh, madelynn, for a Trelawney story, have her get a makeover! That would be hilarious1!!

Author's Response: That WOULD be funny!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/08/07 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

almost done? fantastic! can't wait! :D


Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 02/08/07 16:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

1) *hands over spoon* *grumbles* I didn't need that.

2) Yes, I have been reading hermionies revenge. Hope that wasn't too plagerizing.

3) I have a new poem now. Schmerg, I DO NOT think you will like the pairing, just as a warning.

4) A teacher breakdancing? WOW. My school is totally boooooooooring.

5) This question has been with me for days.... why do you like Theo Nott so much, when we only got a gist of him from the books?


Author's Response: Hermiones_revenge is an inspiration to us allindeed. I will check out your poem, as long as the ship isn't Voldemort/Wormtail. I simply cannot tolerate that one. Oh, I like Theodore Nott, because on JK Rowling's website, she talked about how he was a clever loner who didn't approve of gangs and groups, and he was smarter than Draco but uglier. And I just went, "I want this boy to be my best friend." I just like that type of person.

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