Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 01/29/07 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

But does Alexander MacHamish come into money??? That might pad the anguish a bit for poor old Lucius! Also I doubt whether the Dark Lord's soul is resting, pieces or no pieces.

What a comuppance! Very funny. Is this a one shot, or are you writing a companion piece for Draco? If so I would love to read it...

Author's Response: I stand corrected-- triple post!

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 01/29/07 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

But does Alexander MacHamish come into money??? That might pad the anguish a bit for poor old Lucius! Also I doubt whether the Dark Lord's soul is resting, pieces or no pieces.

What a comuppance! Very funny. Is this a one shot, or are you writing a companion piece for Draco? If so I would love to read it...

Author's Response: Double post!

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 01/29/07 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

But does Alexander MacHamish come into money??? That might pad the anguish a bit for poor old Lucius! Also I doubt whether the Dark Lord's soul is resting, pieces or no pieces.

What a comuppance! Very funny. Is this a one shot, or are you writing a companion piece for Draco? If so I would love to read it...

Author's Response: Hmmm... interesting thought... I think Lucius/Alexander came into his inheritance at the age of 17 and got even more stuff after his father died because, again, his father NEVER knew that he wasn't his biological son. There will be a second (and possibly third) chapter to this story... but oddly enough, I haven't even thought about Draco. That WOULD be an interesting companion piece. Draco as a halfblood, hmmm... and then there's Narcissa: "I MARRIED A WHAT?!"

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 01/29/07 7:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

I'm already waving a spoon! but i'll do something else... that i haven't decided yet, but it will come!!!!!! Mwa-ha-ha-ha...HA!

Author's Response: Ooh... *insert ominous music here*

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 01/28/07 20:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Mwa-ha-ha-ha!!!!
the Peverell crest flatware is finally mine! I WILL RULE THE LEFT STREET-CORNER!!!
*strutts away and scares the hell out of some kids when i laugh manically, standing on a trashcan.*

Author's Response: What will you do, wave a spoon in a menacing manner? ^_^

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 01/28/07 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Okay, Iím feeling rather serious today (or at least right now), so Iíll write a (somewhat) serious review!
This story is both sweet, funny and randomly cool. It was a bit shocking to read that, I really was expecting Aethonia to tell Lucius to give her the Peverell crest flatware, but noooo, this was so much better! To imagine Luciusí facial expression during the letter was an extra plus! The story in itself is well written with good but often silly vocabulary, which I have definitely nothing against. :)
Itís not as good as The Dark Lordís Blog, but then again, Iíve never read anything that fantastic! But itís still really, REALLY good! :D
Iím looking forward to the next chapter! Please keep up the good work!

P.S. hand over the Peverell crest flatware and no one gets hurt!


Author's Response: Thanks very much, Madelynn! This was a really constructive and, um, yummy review! *Hands over flatware in surrender*

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins
Date: 01/26/07 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

erm, i think that you might want to add a part about her using charms to make him look like Abraxious. Just a suggestion! good stuff though.

Author's Response: Hmmm.... well, Lucius just happens to look a lot like Abraxus. He's pale and blond like Abraxus, but as you'll see later, his actual facial features are not as much like the Malfoys'.

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 01/26/07 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

OMG I loooove this story! Is this a one-shot-wonder of yours or a full-blown new series? (I'm hoping for the series!)

Author's Response: Thanks, Alias_Tonks! This is going to be a multi-chaptered thingybobber, though it might only have two chapters. But the ending will be a big surprise!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 01/25/07 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

OK, this is gonna be a quick review, since I'm on the computer secretly( supposed to be studying 4 SAT)..... GOOOD!! More details Monday

Author's Response: Thanks! It's always nice to receive reviews from you.

Reviewer: SevenAndMoreToGo
Date: 01/25/07 5:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Impeccable, Schmergo, as usual...I liked the names you selected for the newer charaters, the bits of humour in between (May the Dark Lord rest in pieces...ingenious) and Lucy (ius!)'s expression when he finished the letter. I found the titlle rather silly, considering the fact that that owl thing happened only for a flit of a moment. I think this story is completle, with the ending hanging so and may not need a new chapter (unless you are planning something completely fantabuloustic). Yet I'm WAITING for an update!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, SevenAndMoreToGo! But actually, the story is not complete. There will indeed be a bit more... I think the ending will really surprise you! Yeah, the title's a little silly... I couldn't help it. I guess I always do silly chapter titles.

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/25/07 1:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Very nice. Well written, and I think you captured Lucius' character perfectly. Nice touch with the snakes.

Author's Response: Double post... ^_^

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/25/07 1:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Very nice. Well written, and I think you captured Lucius' character perfectly. Nice touch with the snakes.

Author's Response: Thanks! Lucius is one of my favourite characters, and since my only fic featuring him is that crazy little poem, I wanted to write something that features a less silly version of him.

Reviewer: wishingforthehallows
Date: 01/24/07 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

How funny! But I do believe no line in your story could be as funny as the title of your chapter. It presents such a lovely mental picture!

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy odd chapter titles.^_^ The Dark Lord's Blog has even weirder titles.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 01/24/07 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

That is absolutely hilarious! In a different way than most of your stories, but that doesn't make it any less good! I can't wait for him to meet his muggle mum...the little snake-boy!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it might be fun to branch off a bit in my writing... even though I'm STILL only writing about Slytherins. I don't know why I keep doing that, since I'm in Hufflepuff and my favourite character is Ron.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/24/07 16:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

the Dark Lord (may his soul forever rest in pieces)---possibly the best line I have ever read anywhere.

Author's Response: Why, thank you!

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 01/24/07 12:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Haha! Lucius' worst nightmare. This was really cute and fun to read. Good luck with the challenge.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! There will be more to come, by the way... I wish you luck, as well!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 01/24/07 11:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

I meant Schmergo...*blushes*

Author's Response: That's okay, people call me Schmerg, Schmergo, Voldykins, Schmerg_The_Impaler, That Weird Chick... pretty much anything works.

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 01/24/07 11:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Yay! I was waiting 4 a story from u, schmerg...and here I get an email saying one of my fav authors have posted a new story!!

Though I didn't like it as much as ur other stories, I must say the idea was VERY original...who could have thought Lucius isn't Lucius.....haha...good job...

Author's Response: Yay, thanks! It's okay if you don't like it quite as much... different people like different kinds of stories. This plot bunny just kinda hopped into my head. There will be more to this one, so maybe you'll like the end of it better. This was just the exposition. Lucius *cough* I mean, Alexander, is one of my favourite characters, so I just had to write a story about him when I saw that Lucius was one of the characters we could write about for this challenge.

Reviewer: VeniaTaint
Date: 01/24/07 11:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

hmmm...intriguing. Personally I think an exploration of Lucius's biological family,his realtionship with Aethonia and his dark objects collection are all in order! Keep up the good work, oh! befor I forget, WRITE MORE NOVEMBER/THEO FICS!
~The Tainted One
P.S. new fic up!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! By the way, another Theo fic is coming soonish, though November's part isn't QUITE as big. I will be sure to check out your story!

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 01/24/07 11:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh, Schmergo, that was awesome! It's just the sort of thing Lucius deserves. Of course, my absolute favorite line was, "...the Dark Lord (may his soul forever rest in pieces)..." I realize that Aethonia was being serious, and that it's not all that likely that she would really know about the Horcruxes, but none of that matters. What matters is that this has to be one of the funniest lines I've read in a VERY long time. This story is great, and I hope to see more of it soon!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks, nuw! I'm loving your story to pieces, so this is quite a compliment from you. I'm glad that you liked the 'rest in pieces' thing. I thought it was too funny to leave out, although it would be OOC for Aethonia to make puns about Voldemort.

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