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Name: allura mystique (Signed) · Date: 06/22/08 9:39 · For: Chapter 1
Thank you for the review and I'll remember your advice for future poems. : )

Name: Summer Rose (Signed) · Date: 06/21/08 13:32 · For: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your poem but it's a bit hard to follow since your lines are always so short and almost choppy. I think if you used more linking words to make your lines seem more like short sentences, your poems would seem to flow better. A poem should make sense AND be enjoyable to read.

But I think the words you chose were goods one's and I enjoyed the way you ended it. You've got talent. :)

~Summer Rose

Name: quick_quotes_quill (Signed) · Date: 06/29/07 4:43 · For: Chapter 1
very very very good
i love it

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: HeRmYgInS (Signed) · Date: 02/23/07 13:53 · For: Chapter 1
Amazing! I've never read anything like it. Loved the end part!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) I'm really glad you liked it! : )

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 20:10 · For: Chapter 1
Wow. So amazing. I love it - especially the ending.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : )

Name: Tagidi Riva (Signed) · Date: 01/24/07 21:07 · For: Chapter 1
Very well done. I especially love the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! : )

Name: WunderWitch (Signed) · Date: 01/24/07 16:54 · For: Chapter 1
om frickin g, that is so sad!! You're really good!!! OM frickin G again!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! : ) I really appreciate your enthusiasm! Thank you again! : )

Name: Phenioxsong22 (Signed) · Date: 01/24/07 14:41 · For: Chapter 1
One of the better poems I have read...it actually had a point, and the way you rhymed and worded it was great!

Author's Response: Thank you! : ) You made my day with those your encouraging review! : )

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