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Reviewer: allura mystique
Date: 06/22/08 9:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thank you for the review and I'll remember your advice for future poems. : )

Reviewer: Summer Rose
Date: 06/21/08 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your poem but it's a bit hard to follow since your lines are always so short and almost choppy. I think if you used more linking words to make your lines seem more like short sentences, your poems would seem to flow better. A poem should make sense AND be enjoyable to read.

But I think the words you chose were goods one's and I enjoyed the way you ended it. You've got talent. :)

~Summer Rose

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 06/29/07 4:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

very very very good
i love it

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 02/23/07 13:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Amazing! I've never read anything like it. Loved the end part!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) I'm really glad you liked it! : )

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/31/07 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. So amazing. I love it - especially the ending.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : )

Reviewer: Tagidi Riva
Date: 01/24/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very well done. I especially love the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! : )

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 01/24/07 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

om frickin g, that is so sad!! You're really good!!! OM frickin G again!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! : ) I really appreciate your enthusiasm! Thank you again! : )

Reviewer: Phenioxsong22
Date: 01/24/07 14:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

One of the better poems I have read...it actually had a point, and the way you rhymed and worded it was great!

Author's Response: Thank you! : ) You made my day with those your encouraging review! : )

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