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Name: Liet Dumbledore (Signed) · Date: 11/18/11 21:44 · For: The beginning
Very.... interesting. I like it!

Name: AHP (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 21:57 · For: The beginning
I don't usually read One-Shots, they are simply too short. Yet, this was the exception. I like this ship; and I am delighted to find a fanfic about this, because I am very upset by the news Jk Rowling has recently stated that Dumbledore is gay. I've always felt that he and Minerva should have been married. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read this! :))

Name: oliverps (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 10:19 · For: The beginning
that's soo true! and this is very cute! haha...nice job

Author's Response: thank you :))

Name: hpluver365 (Signed) · Date: 02/26/07 11:44 · For: The beginning
Hmmm....Dumbledore and McGonagall, not something I can say I've never thought of. I'm not really a big fan of the ship though. I don't know why, because they're perfect for eachother, there's just a nagging feeling...

Anyway, your fic made me rethink them. Their whole relationship was so...cute!

I thought it was kind of confusing how you kept switching point of views. Maybe next time you should had a horizantal line tag (
) everytime you switch views like that.

Other than that, I thought it was a good fic. The reader gets the impression that they are very open from two reasons. One, the fact that they even have a conversation such as that! And two, that the entire fic is dialouge.

Overall, I really liked it. Keep up the good work.


Author's Response: Thanks hpluver365! I would love to hear your second opinion of my stories if my beta is busy. Two more stories are on their way!

Name: a_new_author (Signed) · Date: 02/01/07 10:00 · For: The beginning
i really do like this first short chapter. and i love where you are going with this. i think that you will have a great long piece of fiction on your hands.

Author's Response: I really apreciate that! I love writing romance fanfics, and my beta and me decided this story to be one-shot, but I already made it a chapter. I am writing now H/G fanfic!

Name: pravati (Signed) · Date: 02/01/07 3:00 · For: The beginning
that was different but it was good all the same

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: pravati (Signed) · Date: 02/01/07 2:59 · For: The beginning
that was different but it was good all the same

Name: angel_gryffindor (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 1:43 · For: The beginning
i loved that story although i have a hard time in believing that McGonagall can fall in love!

Author's Response: Yes, McGonagall in love! It's always good to see her soft part insted the strict look.

Name: dancingcarrot21 (Signed) · Date: 01/25/07 22:56 · For: The beginning
It's beautiful Sofija. I love how it turned out.

Author's Response: Thanks Dancingcarrot21, my lovely beta *giggles*!As for you guys I decided this fic to be one-shot, sorry. *wink at my beta*

Name: Lily Roxy (Anonymous) · Date: 01/25/07 9:46 · For: The beginning
Awwwww, that was so sweet! Everyone was perfectly in character, and yet, it was still a new side to them. It was short and sweet, no filler, no useless angst, just... a nice, simple love story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Lily_Roxy, hope the next chapter is good too, yours and mine! *smiles*

Name: chartreusemoose (Signed) · Date: 01/25/07 0:37 · For: The beginning
nicely written but it's so weird to see McGonagall get all mushy lol

Author's Response: Yep, I know... But is good to see McGonagall in love *giggles*

Name: DogLover4Life (Signed) · Date: 01/24/07 21:08 · For: The beginning
This chapter sort of jumped around but the way you showed Minnie and Dimby's emotions was exceptional. Where are they going? I wonder...

Author's Response: Yes, I know it's odd. It's a surprise where are they going,it will be fun!

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