Reviews For Escape
Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 03/18/09 20:43
Chapter: Escape

Still such a great ballad! I love the last two lines. I am nominating it for a Ravenclaw Poetry Award, hence the second review! Great work! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 10/24/08 8:35
Chapter: Escape

I heard this on the podcast and thought it was so good I'd have to leave a review. It's amazing how you got it to rhyme without adding useless words, and it had a great rhythm. I've run out of adjectives meaning good, so I'll stop now, but I just wanted to let you know that I thought it deserved praise.

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 10/14/08 20:46
Chapter: Escape

Wowww this poem is crazy good. I heard it before I read it, on the audiofiction thingie on iTunes, and then I had to look it up in print. Like a lot of other reviewers I thought the last 2 lines were so powerful, but I also loved how you said Sirius "made his journey westward with the night sky as his guide." It just fits so well with how all the Black names that come from constellations. Anyway, I can see why this poem won a prize and was chosen as the first audiofic to be read - its incredible!

Reviewer: Fenrir_Confringo
Date: 10/10/08 9:32
Chapter: Escape

Wow, that was definitely an awesome poem, great job.

Reviewer: pathseekerme
Date: 06/08/08 19:14
Chapter: Escape

How awesome!

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 02/03/08 3:28
Chapter: Escape

Hey hun,

Just dropping by to (read, and hopefully leave a longer review when I have time) & tell you this is so awesome, it's being recommended to people outside of MNFF.

Come back to SPEW. We miss you :(

Reviewer: rainydaze
Date: 11/27/07 18:17
Chapter: Escape

very insightful about black's guilt..i really liked it!

Reviewer: alisonxo0marie
Date: 11/23/07 15:11
Chapter: Escape

wow. this was fantastic. the last stanza got me.

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 11/11/07 8:24
Chapter: Escape

Oh, wow. I loved it. it's totaly amazing. I especially loved the last two lines. incredible.

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/10/07 1:33
Chapter: Escape

Absolutely amazing. Those last two lines especially brought tears to my eyes. You truly deserved to win Best Poem. Congratulations.

Reviewer: Lumos Nermo
Date: 11/09/07 8:00
Chapter: Escape

i loved this it was amazing!especially the last 2 lines.gr8 job:)

Reviewer: iheartharry55
Date: 11/07/07 23:02
Chapter: Escape

I really liked this... I don't usually read the poetry on the site because I don't enjoy it as much, but this one definitely was amazing...great job!

Reviewer: twirlergirl583
Date: 11/07/07 15:13
Chapter: Escape

congradulations on the Win!!! This is a beautiful poem. I really love it.

But there was no one else who knew
The traitor was alive
So Black remained the last hope for
His godson to survive.


I don't think it flows quite right..The last two lines just don't work right...I think if you move the word for to the line right below it, then it will flow better.

it would read:

But there was no one else who knew
The traitor was alive
So Black remained the last hope
For his godson to survive.


Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 11/06/07 21:01
Chapter: Escape

wow... I'm sirius'ly out of words...

your poem is exquisite.

very good!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/06/07 5:54
Chapter: Escape

That was really, really, really, really good.=Sammy

Reviewer: FelicisQuill
Date: 11/05/07 21:22
Chapter: Escape

That was so incredibly well written! Congratulations on your win, you certainly earned it!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/05/07 19:14
Chapter: Escape

Oh gosh this was wonderfully written!!!! congrats!!!!!!

Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 11/05/07 19:08
Chapter: Escape

utterly breathtaking...i'm still in awe

Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 11/05/07 19:08
Chapter: Escape

utterly breathtaking...i'm still in awe

Reviewer: The_Undomiel
Date: 11/04/07 19:33
Chapter: Escape

Omg! This is so pretty and i am amzed at its length! i could never write a poem that long, for me poems just come to me and i sometimes write them down but i cant sit down and actually write a poem like based on something so Great Job!!!!! i love it so much.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Summer Outing by BehindTheVeil 1st-2nd Years
A trip to the seaside quickly becomes a voyage of discovery and destruction...
The Search For Life and Death by UmbraeCalamitas 6th-7th Years
Harry and his friends have been dreaming of seven artifacts that, when brought...
Dark Enough To See The Stars by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Scorpius is looking for answers in the constellation that bears his name. He...
FEATURED
Etched in Gold by Cirelondiel 1st-2nd Years
"It’s like a safe place, somewhere to watch the world, somewhere...
The Elder Tree by the opaleye 1st-2nd Years
It would have been no surprise to see Vernon Dursley sitting on the frosty concrete...
Perfect First by Hermiones Kneazle 1st-2nd Years
Hermione is at her first dance and on her first date, but the night for firsts...
blackbird over the dark field by psijupiter 3rd-5th Years
AU. Severus and Remus forge a damaged and damaging relationship in the aftermath...
Turn to Stone by iLuna17 1st-2nd Years
One summer's night in Hogwarts, two statues are given one night to be human.
Ashes of the Past by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Viktor carries the memory of Grindelwald's path of destruction, passed down...
What War Takes by WeasleyMom 6th-7th Years
War takes things and keeps on taking them, and the things it takes don't come...
The Observer Effect by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva is a watcher. Mostly, she watches Severus. She sees through a glass...
CATEGORIES