Reviews For Grief.
Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/12/07 3:15
Chapter: Disaster.

i take back my stupid first person comment, gud work and keep it up, your freindly neigborhood rich guy (i hate my name but all the gud ones were gone :( ) lol it looks like mouth

Author's Response: lol. That's cool! I'm open to constructive criticism! lol. I get all my mates to read these things before I put them on fanfiction! lol. So they can tell me wot they think I may need to do, such as, one of my mates told me to stop repeating myself in one that I wrote a few years ago! So, yeah. (I have since watched that I do not repeat myself too much! lol.) But lol. Thanks! I have another story in the que now! lol. Still Waiting for it to be approved! lol. It's called "Right Here In My Arms" lol. And I have alot more Werewolf fics at home here! lol. Cheers! Wolfy.

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/12/07 3:13
Chapter: Midnight.

quite a gud bit of writing there, but i feel it would be better if it was not written from remus's view e.g I did this I did that.

:) just a bit of constuctive criticism

i think this story has potential, keep up the gud work :)

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 02/04/07 11:09
Chapter: Disaster.

woah. POOR REMUS!!! *sob!*. and yes, that was quite disturbing, but in a good way. it was very... descriptive and helpful to really understand what a werewolf feels. overall, awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll admit that somehow I even made myself sad reading that after I went through it again! lol. I'v always thought someone should try to really accentuate what Remus' transformations would be like from a personal point of view, and then one of my mates had the idea that I could do it myself! lol. So I gave it a go. I'm glad you think I achieved that. lol! :) Wolfy.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/02/07 2:32
Chapter: Midnight.

the next chapter MUST be validated soon, or else i might explode!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the que now... It took my ages to get this one validated, so I really hope you enjoy it. Wolfy.

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