Reviews For Forever
Reviewer: Magical Pixie Horse
Date: 02/12/07 20:11
Chapter: Evil and Good

I loved this poem. It is beautifully written. I love the wording. It is a perfect poem for Harry Potter. It says exactly what the war is all about, what he's fighting for and how everything is forever. Excellent writing style!

~LMPH3

Author's Response: I thank you all! *mock bow* Seriously though, thanks for your support. =D

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 01/25/07 13:13
Chapter: Evil and Good

*clap clap* :-)...good job! It's beautiful with excellent wording. Hee's my fav stanza:

Even in the midst of tolling bells of war,
Life goes on.
Children are born and love blooms.
The stars will hold us like children forever.


:-)..'tolling bells of war'..reaches me as very powerful.

And this stanza was beautiful and true:

Forever may seem so long,
But forever isnt long at all.
Forever stretches as long as you see it.
It can stretch as far as the stars,
And it can stretch as long as you do./i>

:-)..must be boring u to death now, but i liked it. short, sweet, just about perfect.

Er. not to sound like im begging *gets down on knees*...can you read and review my poems? Thankyewwww ;-)

LadyM

Author's Response: Aww, thankies! =D I'm glad you found a favorite stanza! I'll reveiw your poems. =)

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