so short. so good... TEN!!
WOOOOOOOOOOW!!! That was truly amazing. For such a short story it twisted and turned in ways I never saw coming. Brilliant writing, well done!
That was very very very good! I loved it!
Awwwwww! Cute! Please write more!
cute. i loved it.
Aww! Ever so sweet! Plz write more soon!
hh i really liked that!! i dont uusally like one shots but this was really good you should really add more
very nice!!! that was a good quick story!!