OOh, I really liked this! I think that you've got a great portrayal of the wands going on, and great description of the duel. Am I correct in saying that it was the one in GoF? *giggles at stupidity if so* Just so you know, you spelled about wrong in your disclaimer.
I really like how you ended the poem with the beginning. I absolutely LOVE it when poets do that, and you did it! *huggles*
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!! It could be the GoF battle, or the final battle. Thanks for letting me know about the Disclaimer
Author's Response: The DISCALIMER says that it is the Final Battle, so it must be the final battle *shrugs*
I lovvve it. Your style of writing is so unique. And beautiful.
Author's Response: Aww thanks. I love it too. XD.
YOu should write a poem about the Final Battle! It would be very good, coming from you!
This poem is deep. LOL. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Awww thanks! LOL!
Nice, very good, the repetition was a good idea.
Author's Response: Gratzi!
I like your style! I'm reading all of your stories and I luv them all!!
Author's Response: Haha I noticed =] Thanks! I really like the Hermione, I love you of yours. Its SOOO good.
I LOVED IT!
it was awesome!
I LOVED THE
" ONE INTENDING TO STUN,
ONE INTEDING TO KILL"
keep up the good work biffer
i loBe you
Author's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU lol THANK YOU i loBe you too lol ~biffer
The wa you repeated two lines at the end was very powerful - really got a feeling out.
I like how short the lines are. Short and sweet, they say. :-)
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: OMG thank you. I appreciate it.