Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 03/07/07 18:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

OOh, I really liked this! I think that you've got a great portrayal of the wands going on, and great description of the duel. Am I correct in saying that it was the one in GoF? *giggles at stupidity if so* Just so you know, you spelled about wrong in your disclaimer.

I really like how you ended the poem with the beginning. I absolutely LOVE it when poets do that, and you did it! *huggles*

Great poem!

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!! It could be the GoF battle, or the final battle. Thanks for letting me know about the Disclaimer

Author's Response: The DISCALIMER says that it is the Final Battle, so it must be the final battle *shrugs*

Reviewer: hpfangirl9
Date: 02/25/07 17:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

I lovvve it. Your style of writing is so unique. And beautiful.

Author's Response: Aww thanks. I love it too. XD.

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 02/25/07 10:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

YOu should write a poem about the Final Battle! It would be very good, coming from you!

This poem is deep. LOL. Wonderful.


Author's Response: Awww thanks! LOL!

Reviewer: Edgware
Date: 02/03/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice, very good, the repetition was a good idea.

Author's Response: Gratzi!

Reviewer: LunaTuna
Date: 02/02/07 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like your style! I'm reading all of your stories and I luv them all!!

Author's Response: Haha I noticed =] Thanks! I really like the Hermione, I love you of yours. Its SOOO good.

Reviewer: pikster2
Date: 01/22/07 8:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was awesome!
really dramatic!
keep up the good work biffer
i loBe you

Author's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU lol THANK YOU i loBe you too lol ~biffer

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/21/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

The wa you repeated two lines at the end was very powerful - really got a feeling out.

I like how short the lines are. Short and sweet, they say. :-)


~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: OMG thank you. I appreciate it.

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