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Reviews For A little more

Name: Lalalalatina (Signed) · Date: 04/27/07 18:34 · For: Once I Felt a Little More
Hmmm... a quick read but very sweet. Your really good at writing sweet poems. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Aw thanks!


Name: ravenclawhero (Signed) · Date: 01/26/07 15:28 · For: Once I Felt a Little More
wow. that reminded me so much of Hermione and Ron. You are good. Keep going at it! Rave♥

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 01/21/07 15:17 · For: Once I Felt a Little More
I'm back.

I like how you didn't have a very strict rhyme scheme - its better this way, instead of a forced rhyme, just go with your heart. (Yeah, I know, sounds soppy, get over it.)

You have good punctuation here - I can't punctuate my poems (at ALL), so I admire your great punctuation...*worships* No, I'm kidding, I don't worship you...or do I? :-)

I like how this can be told from either point of view, and that it is true to both Ron and Hermione.

My favorite part:
Our hearts are the same,
Letís clear this pain,
Give into the little more,
Thatís what love is for.


I don't know why I like this so much. It just seems very touching. My real reason for liking this is slipping away...I knew five seconds ago. I guess we'll just say I liked it by instinct. :-) (Whatever that means...)

Keep it up - I'm looking for more poems by you, Angel Feathers...give 'em up!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks! *puts on crown* I love your poems too!


Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 01/20/07 13:13 · For: Once I Felt a Little More
Wow, that is so wonderful. Very poetic, and very Ron/Hermione-ish. (You're probably like, huh? But it was.) Keep it up!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks! You are my best reviewer! *huggles*


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