Well done on a lovely little fic!
I really enjoyed it, you got the characters just right, Hermione was perfect and Snape was just fab, there were enough of his sarcastic Snape-like remarks to keep us happy.
Are you going to follow this up?
Author's Response: Thank you! I was a bit worried about Snape. I don't think I'll follow up.
It sounds as if Hermione was reborn that night. It was very agreeable to read.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh. Oh how delightful. Thank you! *sighs happily* I loved Hermione's inner monolgue while she' fighting with Ron: It was too much. Too much work, too many hours alone in a creaky old house, focusing her attention on fading spell traces. Too much trying to forget the war, trying not to curse anyone who walked through the door, just because she was jumpy and alone and it was dark and the guards had gone home. Too much from Ron, who should have understood all that. It ties us to the characters and show us where they both are.
This line made me snort: They are welcome to expire elsewhere if it pleases them. How perfectly Snapelike!
I really enjoyed this. It had a nice tone - it didn't degrade Ron (or Harry for that matter) it simply showed him in an unfortunate state of mind. One which Hermione can't cure him of, and shouldn't have to. A nice little one shot... but I think you could take it further ;-p
Author's Response: Oh! I'm so glad you liked it. And... oh, I might take it further, I suppose, but I like the story in my other ficverse better - writing Ron this way hurts.