You have much talent for poetry, and this was very wonderful, it was as if it was really Remus letting out his anger towards Fenrir... Though, I know it wasn't him. Well, all in all, very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! : )
Thsi was such a good poem, that it made me feel angry (angrier) at Fenrir for biting him! poor Remus!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) Yeah, I know Fenrir is evil! I'm glad you like it! : )
I think this was truly touching, it brings out the feelings Remus has about being a werewolf, and sincerely, this was a very good poem. You've got talent!
Author's Response: Thank you! : )
This is truly touching, it brings what he may truthfully feel about being a werewolf. I sincerely say, this is a very good poem.
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I love the last stanzas of these three poems, and especially this one's. The last four lines of it are really wonderful and meaningful and haunting - Remus, of course, wishes he weren't a werewolf. These lines depict that image clearly and cleverly. That was a wonderful way to do it.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! : )
Wow. That was great - deep and poignant. I really liked it.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Thank you! : ) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Only one suggestion: at the end of the first stanza, I think you should swap the word 'unmasking' for 'revealing'. It flows better that way, I think.
Otherwise, great poem! I loved it. It was spectacular.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Thanks for your advice, I'll keep it in mind. Thank you for your positve comments! : )
amazing,
i love the style of your writing, it has so much depth to it. i'll remember your name.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was very encouraging! : ) I'll certainly submit more. : )
