Reviews For Within
Reviewer: petra stare
Date: 01/25/07 22:10
Chapter: Within Him

You have much talent for poetry, and this was very wonderful, it was as if it was really Remus letting out his anger towards Fenrir... Though, I know it wasn't him. Well, all in all, very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! : )

Reviewer: petra stare
Date: 01/25/07 22:06
Chapter: Within Him

Thsi was such a good poem, that it made me feel angry (angrier) at Fenrir for biting him! poor Remus!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) Yeah, I know Fenrir is evil! I'm glad you like it! : )

Reviewer: petra stare
Date: 01/25/07 22:01
Chapter: Within Me

I think this was truly touching, it brings out the feelings Remus has about being a werewolf, and sincerely, this was a very good poem. You've got talent!

Author's Response: Thank you! : )

Reviewer: petra stare
Date: 01/25/07 21:58
Chapter: Within You

This is truly touching, it brings what he may truthfully feel about being a werewolf. I sincerely say, this is a very good poem.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) That really means a lot! Thanks!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/25/07 14:58
Chapter: Within Him

I love the last stanzas of these three poems, and especially this one's. The last four lines of it are really wonderful and meaningful and haunting - Remus, of course, wishes he weren't a werewolf. These lines depict that image clearly and cleverly. That was a wonderful way to do it.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! : )

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/25/07 14:54
Chapter: Within Me

Wow. That was great - deep and poignant. I really liked it.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you! : ) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/18/07 14:09
Chapter: Within You

Only one suggestion: at the end of the first stanza, I think you should swap the word 'unmasking' for 'revealing'. It flows better that way, I think.

Otherwise, great poem! I loved it. It was spectacular.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks for your advice, I'll keep it in mind. Thank you for your positve comments! : )

Reviewer: weasly_witch
Date: 01/18/07 4:51
Chapter: Within You

amazing,
i love the style of your writing, it has so much depth to it. i'll remember your name.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was very encouraging! : ) I'll certainly submit more. : )

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