Reviews For Afraid of Falling
Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 04/17/07 17:01
Chapter: Afraid of Falling

this one was set out well you describe whats the other person is feeling with great detail and accuracy i loved it!!!!!!

Author's Response: aw, thanks so much. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Esaul
Date: 03/28/07 21:00
Chapter: Afraid of Falling


"Don't ever call me a coward again."

Such a cheesy line but I LOVE IT!!!!

I need to take a leaf out of Hayley's book because I'm in that same EXACT situation. I care a lot about my best friend that way but I am afraid to do anything. Anyway great job! I'll read the next one tomorrow since my time xD

Author's Response: I love that bit too, though it was really cheesy! I hope it works out with your friend. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: darkveils5
Date: 02/11/07 13:25
Chapter: Afraid of Falling

Very sweet! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 01/31/07 15:37
Chapter: Afraid of Falling

S-W-E-E-T! Please write more?!~H_o_I_

Author's Response: lol, thanks. it's in the queue i promise. I've no idea how long it'll be but i don't think it should be too long.

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 01/27/07 19:29
Chapter: Afraid of Falling

There you go! Sorry for being somewhat rough on your last story, but I hadn't read the ending yet! This is great. It sounds realistically like the kind of relationship Remus would have to have in his Hogwarts years. We obviously see his reluctance with Tonks, and she's the one who has to speak out. It makes sense that Hayley would have to. Well, done. Let me know if you do anymore. This was a very good story.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to submit the next one but the email i recieved from the mod was really confusing. I think I might have to put them into one story. *shrugs* we'll see, and thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: emu254
Date: 01/19/07 9:52
Chapter: Afraid of Falling

awww It's great! This ones even sweeter, i almost cried! aww bless . you can't leave it there you've got to add another bit! keep going! i need to know what happens next!!!

Author's Response: thanks i appreciate it. There should be another installment out soon but i'm not sure whether i need to put something inbetween but will come to that decision shortly. thanks for reviewing, first again!

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