Reviewer: darkmongoose2
Date: 06/20/07 0:24
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

hey. this is a really good start! I can't wait for the other ones you wrote to be posted!

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 05/30/07 19:00
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

wow that was interesting...

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 05/30/07 19:00
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

wow that was interesting...

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 05/22/07 20:55
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

this is a very good friendship even when is only for some time. I hope you continue writing thid is good.

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/04/07 0:34
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

This is great! Luvin' it! Sorry i can't leave a better review, but i dont no what to say! : P Good story though! : D

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry it's taking soooo long to update but I have to completely rewrite the second chapter.

Reviewer: Prongs_Potter_6
Date: 02/06/07 21:51
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

I really (really) love the way you wrote the camaraderie between the Marauders (it reminds me of some people; who could they be?). You've set a wonderful scene for what I'm absolutely certain will be an amazing story.
Keep up the good work!

FNM
JAM

PS: Stags are better than dogs, Gr3g. I'm sorry. Lol.

Author's Response: lol. thanks.

Reviewer: angel_gryffindor
Date: 01/31/07 10:25
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

i love the story you're really talented


Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: padfoot_black
Date: 01/25/07 23:43
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

Great!

awesome job... I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! nice vocab use to frame the story

~gR3g

Author's Response: lol its u! when did u make an account? thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 01/23/07 23:46
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

whooo!!

~the spazz
Just Because

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 01/23/07 22:05
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

It's really good! I like it! your second chapter is 'access denied' though, I HATE it when soriies are like that! Wonderful job!


Author's Response: Thanks! It says access denied because I already submitted the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon.

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 01/23/07 16:43
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

I can't believe I'm only the second one to review! This was so awesome! Please, please, pleeaaasee update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you think its awesome and I can't believe I have ppl already waiting for my story to be updated!

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 01/23/07 16:16
Chapter: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

Awww, I love how they are so great about Remus. You really find a way to portray their emotions perfectly. This is great, mention Lily soon!!

Author's Response: wow thanks! i didn't think anyone would be so excited after the first chapter. i hope you continue reading my story!

Author's Response: Oh btw Lily has a big part in the next chaoter and the rest of the story, don't worry

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