Haha, Hello, Pain Umbridge. Nice name. =P
I haz a suggestion! Interview Snape! Ask him what he thinks of Tralawney. XP IDK.
Fantastic! I can't wait to see the article
not as funny as I hoped but still good. Reply with my great gray, answers to Stormer
Napoleon Dynamite! *cracks up laughing*
Author's Response: Hi! I'm super happy you liked it! =]
Boooooooooooooring
Author's Response: Thanks for being so...err, expresive.
just read ur story how about an interview with voldermort!
Author's Response: Hey, that's cool! Hey, that...brilliant! *rubs hands together*
HAHA this was so funny! Umbridge/Ernie. The new ship of the century! This was hilarious! Keep it up :-)
Author's Response: Yeh, I mean, Ernie is Ernie and Umbridge is a mad cow...so why not?
I can't wait until the public reads this...Excelent story!
Author's Response: Haha, well the public is technically reading, lol! :P
Funny read, though it says its not completed?
Author's Response: Okay, hold on. I'll fix that! Thanks for pointing it out though! ;P
hahahahahaha
Author's Response: :D Glad you liked it! Well, I assume.
HaHa!! Great story idea!! I love the part about Napolean Dynamite. Well post more soon.
Felton_Fan_For_Life
Author's Response: Yeah. I loved you liked it! :P
Really hilarious!!! This was great! Can't wait for future stories!
james_fanatic
Author's Response: I'm really happy you liked it. I have another story wich isn't completed but you can still check it out, though it isn't a humor fic! ;)
very funny!! You got talent, surfer! Keep it up!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! ;D
Is English not your first language? Many errors in grammar and spelling mar what might otherwise have been an enjoyable tale.
Author's Response: Yup. English isn't my first language. But I'll try to be more careful with grammar and spelling next time. Really it has that much spelling errors? I guess that when you read your own story, you don't find the errors.
hmmm it's a pretty good story but it wasnt very funny, sorry.........
Author's Response: Okay, I guess everyone's got different likes when it comes to stories, but I'm happy you reviewed! :)
Good story but you need to work on your grammar and spelling.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, you're right. I guess I'm not that careful when it comes to spelling. You know, ideas overflow my mind. :D
It was good but it had a few errors. I'll point out a few. It is Knight Bus, not Night Bus. Harry and Hermione told Umbridge they were trying to contact Dumbledore, not Sirius. Also, Its the Cruciatus Curse, not charm..Don't take this the wrong way.....Just constructive citisism.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll fix them as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing and constructive critiscm is always good! :P
