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Reviews For My Only Son

Name: Ron x Hermione (Signed) · Date: 06/25/07 13:02 · For: One-Shot
Aw, this was a very, very, very sad and touching one shot. It's nice to see, though, that Lucius actually does love his son enough to feel this badly for himself and to waste the rest of life thinking of him.

The Dark Lord was portrayed very nicely here as well. He's very unmerciful and his sneers and looks are so unjust and mean--- very nice. I like him.

“Not my son… my only son….”

Nice start. All of this is really touching, because usually we see Lucius malfoy portrayed as someone who cares about no one but himself, but to see him care for a child, his son, this way makes me feel happy inside. *giggles*

I was proud of you, Draco. I loved you. I love you.”

Aw, this was really sweet. It's nice to hear that he was proud of him--- it's kind of like he's telling him this solely because he's dead, but I'm sure that Draco would have wanted to have heard it before he was murdered. It's still good to see how you portrayed it, though.

Nice one shot. Very dark, and very sad.

~Lindsey :)

Name: butter_beer_drinker (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 17:13 · For: One-Shot
This was good. I almost felt sorry for him, almost.

Name: BeautyInTheBreakdown (Signed) · Date: 02/04/07 6:38 · For: One-Shot
This story is phenomenal. I can't believe that there aren't fifty thousand reviews all saying that this is amazing. I love the descritions. You're amazing at conveying emotions through the perfect descriptions. I can vividly see Lucius Malfoy, on the floor of his cell, shaking and dreaming. It takes a very good writer for the reader to actually see what they're reading.There wasn't a second where I wasn't sure what was going on in the story. The ending was perfect. What am I saying?!!?!? The whole story was perfect. I give it an A++++ Fantastic piece of writing.

Name: Sly Severus (Signed) · Date: 01/22/07 11:04 · For: One-Shot
Wow. This was wonderful. I absolutly adored it. Sorry this isn't the most detailed review, but that's all I can think of the say. Good luck with the challenge.

Name: HermionePotter (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 18:50 · For: One-Shot
This was so sad... It's not often I feel bad for lucius, and this did it. I truly felt bad for him at the end of the story... this is one instance where ignorance is bliss, but only for so long. Very good.


Name: lantis222 (Signed) · Date: 01/17/07 13:06 · For: One-Shot
That's so sad, I almost feel for Lucious. You dd a wonderful job, I really enjoyed this.

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