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Name: Magic Muffin (Signed) · Date: 03/30/08 12:21 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
this was brilliant! I loved this! its the first poetry I've read...!


Name: tha_looney_one (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 17:28 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
this is an amazingly long and master-ish poem. i would never have bee able to keep going for so long, especially with rhymes. good job.


Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 21:05 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
That was the best poem I've read on this site( and I've rad a good bit of it ). As usual erxellant job. I'm also a fan of Harry Potter Literary Storm.-Sammy


Name: Gonz (Signed) · Date: 01/26/07 19:05 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
I loved this! Gary is really cute, the story is well written, and the whole concept is one of the most orginal things I have seen on this site. Good job!

I liked how Gary was well dumb, but really innocent. He was just ignorant the whole story about what was going on around him. Gary had an unlikely hero quality about him. No matter what happens he just keeps on walking. Imagine if that's we had to do to become a hero, walk. Okay starting a gaint war wouldn't be pretty, but Gary saved the cows. The part were Gary is mooing and mooing in his dream had me in stitches.

But I digress. Overall, I enjoyed how you created a character that most would consider a bubbling idiot and turned him into the cutest little hero in the Harry Potter world.

Great ballad and good luck in the challenge!


Name: aliauthor (Signed) · Date: 01/16/07 20:07 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
shmergo: that's what this poem reminds me of! Dr. Seuss!


Name: aliauthor (Signed) · Date: 01/16/07 20:00 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
one word, mind_over_matter:

wow

this is very good. He'd be a legend (if gnomes had them)


Name: GryffindorGoddess (Signed) · Date: 01/16/07 18:16 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
Wow, quite an epic ballad! I was very amused by this little story though I think I missed the part that connected it to the HP world... It was kind of hard to read at times because the iambic rhyming was sometimes unstable. On a more positive note I quite love your use of punctuation, especially the parenthetical asides on every other line. Very clever and clearly you put much effort into this poem. Good luck in the challenge! ~GG


Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 01/16/07 17:38 · For: The One, the Great, Gary the Green
I still love this poem. It is truly epic, and reads a lot like Dr. Seuss.


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