I feel so bad telling you to submit in the R/T cat now that I've seen the stern warning on the front page! I honestly thought it was submit to one cat so not to give two mods the same fic to read and then edit afterwards because of the Note on the editing page. Sigh. I've fixed mine, and wished the word would've come out before you had to fix yours. Again, my apologies!
Author's Response: Hey, no probs. I sorted it out so no worries! Thanks!
Nice! I especially liked these lines
Think of me my love,
Think Pink.
The title also suits the poem very nicely. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Nice! I especially liked these lines
Think of me my love,
Think Pink.
The title also suits the poem very nicely. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks - the title just popped into my head. Thanks again!
Oh, that is cute and serious at the same time. Wow. Great job, I really like this one. Its so true for Tonks, and how she feels for Lupin when he's in wolf form...
My favorite (Yes, geez, I'm American, I don't add 'u's everywhere) line? When you fall, drowning in the rain, / Think of me, smile for me
It is just very sweet and Tonk-ish. (Which, thank you, I know is not a word.)
I like how it has a loose rhyme scheme. You don't force the rhymes out, which is good - usually rhyming poetry sounds fake or made just to rhyme, when poetry should be made to show feeling. So you definitely did a great job - especially since I hate rhyming, yet I love this poem. :-) (Well, I don't hate rhyming...)
I also like the part where Tonks says that if Lupin dies, she'd die, too. So sweet. She is so devoted to him...*sigh* (Oh my gosh, I didn't put in my bio that I am a total Remus/Tonks fan...)
Um, I know this is getting sort of longish...oh well...I still have more to say.
I can totally see this as being said by Tonks. It is extremely realistic to the books, and I found it very enjoyable - and I want you to write more poetry!
(Though since you have such a way with words, a story wouldn't be too bad, either...)
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am in the process of writing a story, but it isn't in queue yet! Thanks!
Im working on a poetry fic, but this is really good!!!! I will always review your work!!! If my fic gets posted, will you read it? It called the worst has come by bertiebott12. I love this fic!
Author's Response: Thanks! Of course I will! Thank you for the praise!
I have a different view of R/T, but yours is very moving. I think you should consider adding Romance/R/T cat to your poem to give more Tonks and Remus fans a chance to read it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
