Reviews For Solace
Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/25/07 0:17
Chapter: Solace

Wow, that was really good. I almost started crying. I think you caught Ron's pain and loss very well. Your writing is good too.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/25/07 0:16
Chapter: Solace

Wow, that was really good. I almost started crying. I think you caught Ron's pain and loss very well. Your writing is good too.

Author's Response: See above : )

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/20/07 22:17
Chapter: Solace

The second sentence of the very beginning formed a huge knot in my tummy. It was very powerful, you showed his grief exceptionally. You had a few run on sentences, you may want to go over that. When Ron was climbing the church steps. Oh that was heart-wrenching.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that it evoked such emotion. That was my intent with this story. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: killermis
Date: 01/15/07 20:22
Chapter: Solace

I really enjoyed this story, though I hope it won't be the case in DH, I really liked how you had Ron develop more as a character, and really gave him depth, very realistic, very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my story. This was my first attempt at Ron, so I'm pleased he came out IC. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 01/15/07 12:04
Chapter: Solace

Shivers ran up and down my spine as I read this. Beautifully angsty, and full of compassion. Fabulous work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so pleased you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 01/15/07 1:16
Chapter: Solace

beautiful. very short, and it ended rather abruptly for me, but especially the end was moving. and this line really struck me: "not five minutes after he had found rest and respite from the long and hard battle he had been fighting his entire life."

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. That is one of my favorite lines. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dorky Dorcas
Date: 01/14/07 9:32
Chapter: Solace

WOW!!
Dat was really good gonna put it on my faves

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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