Reviews For If You Were Me
Reviewer: xMarauderx
Date: 02/02/07 3:13
Chapter: I Told You So!

Hey nice chapter. I liked the Harry-Hermione interaction in this chapter. I like the focus on their relationship. However I am missing Ron in this too. Even though you might not include him in this story in person, I would love to have a mention of him as the fic will be unrealistic without that.

Author's Response: I totally agree, about Ron not being there. Up to a few days ago, I had thought that I would work in an explanation in later chapters, but it really made more sense to explain things earlier in the story, so I edited "Misunderstandings" - the second chapter - with an explanation. Please, tell me how you like it!

Reviewer: xMarauderx
Date: 01/28/07 2:17
Chapter: A New Message

Once again you amaze me with your Mystic!Hermione. I loved the descripton of the dream as well as the whole mysterious tone of the story. I liked the part about Ravenclaw's wand and I'm curious about the two Hermiones.
Great job...do continue soon!

Author's Response: Mystic!Hermione... perhaps I should start a new genre - I'm enjoying her, too! :D And I'm working hard on the next chapter, so don't worry! <3 Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 01/27/07 10:16
Chapter: Suspicions and Lies

This a very interesting premise for a fic and well written. I am wondering however where you have placed Ron in your story. He is not mentioned once in 4 chapters yet supposedly is also standing by Harry in the hunt for Horcruxes.

Author's Response: I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! Well, yes... I have not forgotten about Ron, though I have been avoiding the issue (sorry!). In the early drafts of the story, he was with Harry and Hermione, but I wanted to focus on their relationship, and Ronniekins kept getting in the way. :p But since I haven't even mentioned him yet, we don't know whether he's standing by Harry in the hunt for Horcruxes, so we'll see what happens! :D Thanks again! <3

Author's Response: Hey! I'd like to thank you again for pointing out that little incongruity in my story. I've been thinking about ways to fix it for the past few days, and I edited the second chapter, "Misunderstandings," with an explanation. I'd really like to hear what you think of it! :D

Reviewer: mostly_harmless_66
Date: 01/25/07 14:52
Chapter: A New Message

Very intruiging! Update soon, please

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad that you liked it! I've almost got the fourth chapter finished, so no worries! :D

Reviewer: xMarauderx
Date: 01/17/07 11:38
Chapter: Prologue

Oh wow....this is so intriguing! I'm hooked from this chapter itself..please update sooner.

I wonder who the figure on the ground is.

Author's Response: Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed the first little taste of my story... hehehe... will I ever reveal who the figure on the ground is? We will see... :p Haha, I love creating tension. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! <3

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