Wow....
And I mean it...
Wonderful beginning, I'm sticking with this story, that's for sure, great idea for a Dramione!!
Can1t wait to read the next chapter!!!
Yay! *victory dance* A new chapter, huzzah! Wonderfully written and humerous. =)
(This is slytherins_queen2 by the way, I can't acess my other account.) Well done, I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait until next chapter! =)
Yay! *victory dance* A new chapter, huzzah! Wonderfully written and humerous. =)
(This is slytherins_queen2 by the way, I can't acess my other account.) Well done, I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait until next chapter! =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
perfect. draco finally got annoyed enough to help her. what will happens next?
i really liked this chapter, they were both so funny! I can just see hermione rambling away and malfoy getting v irritated! lol. I cant wait for more, hopefully you wont have to go through so much trouble again with the v strict mods! Update soon!
and I don't think the cruciatus curse leaves any outward markings.
I like draco's attitude. I do think though that he would have lasted longer under hermione's badgering.
question--how come draco can see but not touch her?
Author's Response: The cruciatus curse didn't leave the marks per say, but since she was under such extremem pain, she inflicted the injuries herself. Thanks, he might've. I think he wouldn't have liked being made to look crazy however. That question will be answered later in the story-it spoils it if I answer now.
my thoughts--I don't think draco would help her unless there's anything in it for him. he would probably enjoy baiting her and ignoring her on purpose.
Author's Response: I never thought of it like that, but now that you mention it, it seems like he would do that. Thank you for the comment.
hahahahahahahahaha!..i love that......Drakey-poo! lmfao!.....i love this story, its not something you see everyday. PREFECTION!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I can totally relate to having a chapter rejected about 15 times...It's horrible! But I'm really glad this chapter got accepted...It's really good! I think it's hilarious how Hermione just kept on annoying him until he finally agreed. I hope you can get the next chapter up soon!!
~emoprincess26
Author's Response: I know! Thank you! I hope when I do submit the next chapter it will go through. In fact, I'm writing it right now. Thanks again for reading it and enjoying it, that means a lot to me.
Author's Response: I know! Thank you! I hope when I do submit the next chapter it will go through. In fact, I'm writing it right now. Thanks again for reading it and enjoying it, that means a lot to me.
Very interesting idea for a story, definitely different from anything else I've read... Though, if I were Draco, I wouldn't have trusted Hermione's potions advice - she might have been giving him wrong instructions on purpose to make him ruin his potion... Well, looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: Yea, in here, Hermione's just showing off. I think it would bother him more if she's right and he's wrong than if she's just trying to sabatoge him. Thank you!
Very interesting idea for a story, definitely different from anything else I've read... Though, if I were Draco, I wouldn't have trusted Hermione's potions advice - she might have been giving him wrong instructions on purpose to make him ruin his potion... Well, looking forward to finding out what happens next.
AHH!!! get your chapter through your betas(james_fanatic is my friend in real life) and update soon please. One thing, when Pansy uses her 'pet name' is it supposed to be Dracey-poo or Drakey-poo because you used both. Just wondering.
Author's Response: Oh, whoops! I'll fix that. It's supposed to be Drakey-poo. Thanks for telling me. I did send the chapter to all of the betas listed, kathyhermy123 twice-the second time she betad it, it went though. Thanks for catching my mistake!
neat! but i do need u to update sooner...
Author's Response: Sorry again about that. It took forever to get it to go through.
i really like this story. the plot is simply amazing and you've done a good job with the characters. i'm anxious to read more! well done!
i'm loving it! brilliant idea
please update soon
Author's Response: Will do, sorry about the long wait, it was out of my control. I submitted it so many times, it was crazy.
I just thought of somthing else. Yes this is alot like "Just Like Heaven" it also reminds me of "Ghost" yep. I also saw a comercial for this movei where a boy dies and has to find out who merdered him. Yep. I have so many questions that I know you can not anwer cause that will spoil. Yep. Oh well.
Author's Response: Really? I've never seen 'Ghost'. Yea, I've seen that commercial too, I want to see that movie. This story isn't going to be like that because Hermione already knows who did this.
Good Great and slightly better than perfect :} Keep going!
This i rediculous! Whats so wrong about your story that it has been rejected 15 times?! I really like your story so far, keep submitting it!
Author's Response: I know! I hope it will go through this time.
very well written. i like the story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to know that you like it.
Helloooo. Just thought I'd drop in and say how good this story is. I really like the way you make Hermione trying to get people to notice her. I thought that was really funny. The mods need to get the chapter up! *growls in frustration*. Oh, well, send me the next chapter when you have it written.
james_fanatic
Author's Response: Yea, hopefully it will be put up soon. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoy it.
