Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 07/12/07 1:49
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

I just have to re-read this again and again this is the tenth time i've read this. It's really good. Although Draco does seem OOC. I mean I don't think that draco would repeat word for word almost everything or would do what he was told. But great story. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks! For Draco's OOCness, he hit his head hard on his fall making him obey Hermione, yea, that's it. Of course. ;) I'm gald you like it!

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 07/04/07 4:34
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Oh you're awsome! You put a four of my favorite characters in one story!!!! I love it. Cant really wait for the update! It really is great and the twist. As i said before, Cant wait for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is being written, unfortnately, I have a case of writer's block along with a cold. I hope the next chapter will be up soon, but I'm not sure, depends on when my writer's block becomes unblocked.

Reviewer: averynseamus
Date: 06/29/07 23:46
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

this is kinda funni....plz finish!!!

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 06/28/07 15:53
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Yippie! She'll be cured! Update soon!

Author's Response: Of course! She has to be cured, otherwise she can't kiss Draco! But you didn't hear that. Actually, if you've seen Just Like Heavan, you'll know basically what happens.

Reviewer: double_life
Date: 06/26/07 17:09
Chapter: Realization

I like it....very interesting.

Reviewer: DracosGurl101
Date: 06/25/07 16:57
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

i absoutly love this story! it's a brilliant idea and completly ah-mazing! please write more a.s.a.p i cannot stand it to wait any longer! it feels like "Deathly Hollows"! lol please write more when you possibly get the time. i love it!

Reviewer: DracosGurl101
Date: 06/25/07 16:56
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

i absoutly love this story! it's a brilliant idea and completly ah-mazing! please write more a.s.a.p i cannot stand it to wait any longer! it feels like "Deathly Hollows"! lol please write more when you possibly get the time. i love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! I've started writing the 5th chapter, but it'll be done in a little while (a week, maybe 2) because I have to go to this annoying transition camp thing for high school. I'll get writing it!

Reviewer: lily_hp16
Date: 06/25/07 16:26
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

I love the whole thing! It's really good! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 06/24/07 22:55
Chapter: Realization

Amazing. I love it! Can't wait to read chapters three and up. ~MJ

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like them!

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 06/22/07 21:33
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Decent, but I'd expected you to update, that was good !

Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, it takes a while sometimes, especially since it was rejected and had to be re-betad,

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 06/22/07 19:46
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Ooooh. I must say, this story gets more exciting by the minute. And the twist with Lily Evans and James Potter? Priceless! I've probably said this a million times before, but you are an excellent writer. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it! Being told I'm an excellent writer never gets old. Feel free to say it as often as you want :)

Reviewer: silverstrand1
Date: 06/22/07 18:25
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Oh that was great! I can not wait to read Lily's journal! That will be cool! Keep up the fantabulous work!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: slayer_girl45
Date: 06/22/07 18:22
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

YAY! Another Chapter! And yet another cliffie... grrr... or well would be angry if i didn't like your story so much. Just outof curiousity , how many chapters are there going to be?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I have no idea how many chapters there will be. I'm writing it one chapter at a time. I think there will be about 8 total. That may change, but that's the rough estimate at the moment.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/22/07 15:22
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

oy vey. cliche. the lily-and-james bit was kinda predictable.

Author's Response: I was trying to avoid cliches. Which one did I use, because I don't know of it. If it's the Lily and James part, I've never read a Dramione fanfic where that was included. I would like to know what part was cliche.

Reviewer: dracosgirlfriend
Date: 06/21/07 22:49
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

why did you stop there


Author's Response: Because I'm evil and torture readers with cliffhangers. Mwahahahahahahahaha!!!

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 06/21/07 22:46
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

I love it! I love the movie you've based it off of, and I like how you incorporated Harry's parents into it. Great job...update soon! :D


Author's Response: Thanks! An update should come up in a couple of weeks!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/21/07 19:11
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Well, I'm normally not a Dramione shipper, but this isn't too mushy and so it's ok. I know what Dumbledore meant!
♥s HLR

Reviewer: Gwinna
Date: 06/21/07 19:04
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Interesting twist with Lily and James... I can't wait to find out what Lily wrote in her diary; hopefully it'll help Hermoine and Draco. Oh, and I liked the part with Harry and Ron. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! It will help them, I'll make sure of that. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 06/21/07 16:46
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

I love where you are taking this story and look forward to seeing more. The only criticism I can give is that I don't believe that it was very in character for Ron and Harry to run off to avoid research. It makes me think of the Tri-Wizard Tournament and all the time Ron and Hermione spent helping Harry solve his clues. This is the soul of their best friend that we have this time and I think they would not only want to help out but it would be magnified considering that only their least favorite person in the school is doing something about it.

Regardless, I always look forward to your updates and wait with anticipation for the next one - Good job!
~Nicole (NikkiSue)

Author's Response: Thanks! I had to make Harry and Ron leave Hermione and Draco alone as to help move their relationship along, and Harry and Ron would have done anything in their power to stop it, I couldn't have that, so they got to be prats who decided to avoid books, but yes, it was out of character for them. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 06/21/07 16:25
Chapter: Dumbledore's Help

Oh wow, my name was in the credits, thanks! I really enjoyed this chapter, Dracos reaction to s.p.e.w was so good, and the Lily and James bit really added an extra twist! I really liked Harry and Rons reaction to Draco saying he could see hermione, and the trick question, LOL! At least they reacted better than the person in Just Like Heaven...although seeing draco chased around by a yelling woman with a knife would have been amusing... Ahh, the word Draco and sweet, id never though i'd see the day, or read it... I like how your getting them closer without them particulary noticing.. I cant wait to find out more about Lilys experience! Also, Ron and Harry are prats, why arent they helping their friend?! Still, theyre boys (no offense) I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought making Harry and Ron prats would help Hermione and Draco grow closer, faster. I was tempted to have a yelling woman with a knife chase Draco, but I couldn't think of a Harry Potter character who would do that. Thanks for the Harry and Ron idea! It really helped this chapter!

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