clever story. It does leave more questions than it answers. How was Vance going to betray the Order? How exactly did Snape stop it? But it does give enough for the general idea.
Wow, that is amazing. There is only one question: so she isn't really dead?
Great stroy. I love your use of details. Again, good job.
Author's Response: In my story, at least, she isn't really dead. I took Dumbledore's suggestion that he could hide Draco by making it appear that he had died and applied it to Emmeline's story. Thanks for the review!