Haha, she kept pestering him about calling her beautiful, and every Hermionish detail was perfect. You are a great writer, keep up the good work.
Aww, how cute! Love the fluff! Keep it up! (other stories of course, I know this is a short one...but that's a good thing. I'm getting sick of reading 25 chapter novels!)I love Hermione's line at the end. Such a teeenage girl right? PERFECT!
Adorable! Amazing. I'm left speechless... Everything was perfect. *sigh*. Definately one of the best I've ever read! Too bad it was a one-shot! Rating=10
You are a great writter! I've read all your stories and I love them! Keep writting and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
Aww, so cute! Well-written, as I've come to expect from you ; ) and the scene at the end had my own stomach in butterflies. Brilliant!
AWE........ SO CUTE!! I loved it. Keep up your good work!
WOW! i loved it! its too bad its a one shot, that was excellent! I'm wondering, have you ever read Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants? The third book came out, and it basically had the same scenario of the girl comes down with fever, boy helps girl. check it out!~ Definetly a 10! keep it up! Ps: im also reading your other story, also terrific!
You are really good at making these stories.
really good start
i love the very detailed discription of french kissing
That was very good. Excellent in fact. Nice wrting style.
that was graet, nice detail. I wish it was more than a one shot...
Most excellent chick keep up the good work!
EXCELLENT story!! i love all of the detail...very original. keep up the good work!!!