Reviewer: Foxtrot
Date: 07/06/05 10:17
Chapter: One-shot

Haha, she kept pestering him about calling her beautiful, and every Hermionish detail was perfect. You are a great writer, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 04/17/05 23:34
Chapter: One-shot

Aww, how cute! Love the fluff! Keep it up! (other stories of course, I know this is a short one...but that's a good thing. I'm getting sick of reading 25 chapter novels!)I love Hermione's line at the end. Such a teeenage girl right? PERFECT!

Reviewer: mspadfoot89
Date: 04/03/05 12:24
Chapter: One-shot

Adorable! Amazing. I'm left speechless... Everything was perfect. *sigh*. Definately one of the best I've ever read! Too bad it was a one-shot! Rating=10

Reviewer: Geekchic
Date: 04/02/05 0:15
Chapter: One-shot

You are a great writter! I've read all your stories and I love them! Keep writting and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: PhysicalGraffiti
Date: 03/22/05 20:11
Chapter: One-shot

Aww, so cute! Well-written, as I've come to expect from you ; ) and the scene at the end had my own stomach in butterflies. Brilliant!

Reviewer: Emma4Irish
Date: 03/13/05 22:42
Chapter: One-shot

AWE........ SO CUTE!! I loved it. Keep up your good work!

Reviewer: SiriusStar07
Date: 03/12/05 1:25
Chapter: One-shot

WOW! i loved it! its too bad its a one shot, that was excellent! I'm wondering, have you ever read Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants? The third book came out, and it basically had the same scenario of the girl comes down with fever, boy helps girl. check it out!~ Definetly a 10! keep it up! Ps: im also reading your other story, also terrific!

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 03/05/05 17:56
Chapter: One-shot

You are really good at making these stories.

Reviewer: mudblood79
Date: 12/25/04 22:07
Chapter: One-shot

really good start

Reviewer: muggle4ever
Date: 12/20/04 13:29
Chapter: One-shot

i love the very detailed discription of french kissing

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 12/16/04 11:31
Chapter: One-shot

That was very good. Excellent in fact. Nice wrting style.

Reviewer: Weasel King Fan
Date: 12/15/04 14:15
Chapter: One-shot

that was graet, nice detail. I wish it was more than a one shot...

Reviewer: lovestruck90
Date: 12/15/04 0:18
Chapter: One-shot

Most excellent chick keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Pottrgrl
Date: 12/13/04 19:14
Chapter: One-shot

Very nice!

Reviewer: emma57
Date: 12/13/04 15:32
Chapter: One-shot

EXCELLENT story!! i love all of the detail...very original. keep up the good work!!!

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