Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 12/08/09 4:27
Chapter: Underground

Brilliant. One of my favourite Harmony fics by far! Dark/angsty Harmony is always the best. Fluffy Harmony doesn't work very often just because of the nature of the pairing. There is something so deliciously forbidden with Harry/Hermione and you really captured that! I did like how you ended on a lighter note, though. It's like you came full circle. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review! I'm really glad you liked it. I kind of see Harmony as complicated, Harry and Hermione are very much on the same level emotionally, but when bad things happen, I'm not sure that's always easy and that's what I tried to convey. Thank you again for the review!

Reviewer: OneBucDad
Date: 09/07/09 7:56
Chapter: Underground

I absolutely love this. A little romance with angst. Just my cuppa. This is easily one of my favorite one shots (so-to-speak). I think it was well written. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the nice review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the nice review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/08/08 17:57
Chapter: Underground

I can completely understand the actions of each character, you've written this brilliantly and although it is quite dark in mood, it's a very realistic view of what might have happened after the war. I particularly liked the last line, They fell asleep again, not to nightmares of an unpreventable past, but to dreams of an unwritten future.
I also found the line We both lived, yet for so long we haven’t really been living, summed up the whole situation. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind and detailed review. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: geniusy2k
Date: 11/22/07 14:19
Chapter: Underground

This is a great story, I could picture the story in my head...

Author's Response: That's wonderful! That's for reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: laurygrangerpotter22
Date: 10/07/07 18:18
Chapter: Underground

Aw...I love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! I'm glad you loved it :)

Reviewer: SummerAle
Date: 07/28/07 22:44
Chapter: Underground

Not terrible.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review, I'm glad to know it wasn't offensive.

Reviewer: thesubmarinesleeper
Date: 07/20/07 11:55
Chapter: Underground

I loved this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind review!

Reviewer: pureblood_4489
Date: 07/19/07 2:42
Chapter: Underground

Wow that was weird!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing....I hope you liked it even though it was weird.

Reviewer: rubyredpixie
Date: 06/25/07 0:29
Chapter: Underground

this is really good work.. I usually don't like harry/hermione ships but this one is nicely done.. good job

Author's Response: I'll rarely get a kinder review than from those who don't ship H/HR that like my stories. Thank you so much for braving this story and responding, I am so grateful! Have a wonderful day!

Reviewer: jensenluvr92
Date: 06/08/07 13:12
Chapter: Underground


Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hott_Stuff_4u56
Date: 06/04/07 13:35
Chapter: Underground

i was reading and came across this quote "Yet the infamous trio sat in separate corners of the Gryffindor common room not celebrating " infamous means someone who has a bad reputaion the trio isn't infamous.

Author's Response: Oh geez, you are absolutely right, how embarassing, both my beta and I missed that...Thank you for catching that though I will have to fix that.

Reviewer: Crushed Velvet
Date: 06/02/07 7:08
Chapter: Underground

WOW! I LOVE THIS! Finnaly someone who knows how to write a romance story. I adore this story. Well done. Very emmotional and descriptive.
Lots of love Kristina xoxoxoxoxxoxoxooxx

Author's Response: Wow thank you for a very kind review, I worked hard on this story I'm glad I got it right. Thank you again, such a nice review!

Reviewer: wolfang
Date: 05/26/07 18:47
Chapter: Underground

I loved that story keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: This is a one-shot so there isn't anymore, but I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 04/06/07 17:20
Chapter: Underground

Aww.. I loved the ending. Awesome job. Loved it.

Author's Response: Well thank you very much for reading and leaving a kind review!

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/02/07 15:36
Chapter: Underground

That was beautiful x I am suck a H/HR shipper and these stories just please me! I have recently learned to appreciate how difficult it actually is to write a story like this and i must say you have done it wonderfully.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It is hard isn't it? Everytime I write a H/Hr I still never feel like i caputer the essense of their romance...but thank you very much!

Reviewer: lacey22
Date: 04/01/07 1:21
Chapter: Underground

i like it one of the best i ve read on this site

Author's Response: Wow, that's very kind of you! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: hungry_dragon
Date: 03/02/07 3:00
Chapter: Underground

skillfully written

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review.

Reviewer: makinmagic323
Date: 02/26/07 1:49
Chapter: Underground

i like it, and it also seems very believeable

Author's Response: Thank you very much! That means a lot to me that it seemed believable.

Reviewer: ooblagal24
Date: 02/25/07 12:53
Chapter: Underground

wow. that was amazing! You are so gifted. Are there any more stories that you have written because I would love to read them

Author's Response: I have many more stories, if you just click on the link on my author name. I have 9 stories up right now, 7 one-shots for easy reading, or 2 chaptered fics if you are feeling fanatic. Thank you for your kind review!

Reviewer: buckbeaker
Date: 01/23/07 16:41
Chapter: Underground

oh. my. gosh. i love this so much! extremely well written, in "the notebook" fashion. i heart it, i heart it, i heart it! wahoo! please though... don't write sequel. sequels never turn out so good. prequel would b enice thoguth.

Author's Response: There won't be a sequel, I promise (probably not a prequel either though) Thank you for the wonderful review though, it makes me smile!

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