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Name: Welshgreengrl (Signed) · Date: 11/15/07 19:06 · For: Unwitting Violation
ooooo good story! i liked it alot!!


Name: GringottsVault711 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 23:08 · For: Unwitting Violation
OMFG.


Author's Response: Pardon?


Name: TheVanishingAct (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 22:10 · For: Unwitting Violation

OMG. McKee. I WELCOME YOU BACK WITH OPEN ARMS!


*cough* Yes. Anyway.


I, obviously, loved it. I'm so happy McKee is back, and that we can stop mourning her death. :-D Favourite line: "As soon as they stepped in, it was a cacophony of lights, mechanical music, screeching, bass beats and thumping floors." I liked it partly because of the imagery, partly because of the disco-ness of it, and partly because I like the word "cacophony". :D I found one mistake: She grabbed his hand and loosely held it between her fingers before saying, “Gisellia. Is my name.” You have Gisellia here, but Gisella later on; I believe it's Gisella, but just clarifying. :) Oh, I ADORED it. McKee! I missed you!



Author's Response: I'm so very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing. I actually was playing some of that thumping music while writing, so it really helped to set the scene. You're right about Gisella. Thank you. :)


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