Reviewer: Welshgreengrl
Date: 11/15/07 19:06
Chapter: Unwitting Violation

ooooo good story! i liked it alot!!

Reviewer: GringottsVault711
Date: 01/09/07 23:08
Chapter: Unwitting Violation

OMFG.


Author's Response: Pardon?

Reviewer: TheVanishingAct
Date: 01/08/07 22:10
Chapter: Unwitting Violation

OMG. McKee. I WELCOME YOU BACK WITH OPEN ARMS!


*cough* Yes. Anyway.


I, obviously, loved it. I'm so happy McKee is back, and that we can stop mourning her death. :-D Favourite line: "As soon as they stepped in, it was a cacophony of lights, mechanical music, screeching, bass beats and thumping floors." I liked it partly because of the imagery, partly because of the disco-ness of it, and partly because I like the word "cacophony". :D I found one mistake: She grabbed his hand and loosely held it between her fingers before saying, Gisellia. Is my name. You have Gisellia here, but Gisella later on; I believe it's Gisella, but just clarifying. :) Oh, I ADORED it. McKee! I missed you!



Author's Response: I'm so very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing. I actually was playing some of that thumping music while writing, so it really helped to set the scene. You're right about Gisella. Thank you. :)

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