Reviews For Conan
Reviewer: Moneyplant
Date: 05/18/12 9:26
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Oh, I didn't know you replied reviews! Since you do, you deserve a better review.

Truth to be told, I felt scared and tense while reading this. I like the descriptions and the background.

I think the baby is Harry! And I suggested before that the priest could be Sirius. Or maybe Severus.

Ha, Severus as a priest! Is the world coming to an end?

It also amazes me that you sound like a very carefree and smiley person through your notes, but all of your fics are dead serious and quite profound.

Please update!

Reviewer: Moneyplant
Date: 05/18/12 9:15
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

And that priest so happened to be a man called Sirius Black.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/23/08 15:34
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

That was so despairing, is that a word? It's brilliantly written, and I can't wait to find out who the baby is, and what'll happen to them, but oh that poor man and woman.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the compliment! and yes it does sound rather despairing, if that is a word. once i get around to writing this story (after finishing my other), i don't think it will be though =) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Xavier8888
Date: 06/28/07 20:46
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

intriguing

Author's Response: why thank you =)

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 04/08/07 23:40
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

awww, that's so sweet! you could just leave it there if you had been thinking of adding more...

Author's Response: *shh*....i just might.... =)

Reviewer: prongs_at_heart
Date: 04/08/07 15:10
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

next chapter please? i love it so far! such. . . suspense!

Author's Response: well, you're going to have to wait until i finished my other story, i hate to say =/ but this one's my fav of the two =) glad you like it!

Reviewer: Keturah7
Date: 04/05/07 14:21
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

i like this story tho

Author's Response: thanks =)

Reviewer: Keturah7
Date: 04/05/07 14:20
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

finish "Behind Those Emerald Eyes"!!! Please.....

Author's Response: haha, i am =) the second part of ch. seven should have been validated by now, but feel free to bug the mods!

Reviewer: stardust
Date: 03/20/07 22:46
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Wow Lanelle. I can't begin to tell you how much I love this. I do love "Emerald Eyes" so much, but this - do you mind if I tell you I love it even *more* than the other already? You're experimenting with another style with this, no? It's *awesome*.

It's so deeply descriptive and the language you use is so rich. The similies and metaphors, the mood and the tone? The voice here is as though epic, really - you paint the mood so strongly that as you read you have this seeming importance press down upon you. I was there in Scotland with you... Vivid as though I saw it in a film, or a dream. I love the repeated "Chirrup. Chirrup. Chirrup." It had an almost hypnotic effect for me that lent the story ambience and ryhthm and also a sense of urgency, when the pattern was disrupted.

And I love where you're going with the references, m'dear. The image of the priest and the church, and this dark valley of death in Scotland. It's very interesting and unlike anything I've seen in fanfiction - I cannot wait to see where you go with it. You just have to promise - really promise - to follow through on this one, or else it's the cruellest tease I've ever known. =)

Author's Response: So once again, I'm waiting for plentiful time so that I can write you a nice long awesome reply!

Author's Response: Hehe, "Conan" is kind of my little pet =) By far my favorite of the two stories, although I have no idea when I will actually finish Conan, lol. Work and school are controlling my life! And your comment about experimenting with different styles -- this style is actually what I usually write, my specialty, if that's not taking it too far ;D

I'm a movie addict, so writing as if the reader can actually see the story taking place through the words is what I try to always do =) The chirrup partc I had fun putting in the story to make it seem more suspensful, in my opinion, but I did have to go back and add a couple of chirrups to give it enough words to submit! Haha =D

Thank you so much for the compliment about this being like nothing you've read in fanfiction! I strive for originality as much as I can. And I will DEFINATELY finish this story, but may change some of the plans I originally had for it, and that takes more time...not to mention my horrible time schedule aforementioned...lol. Thank you SO much for leaving me reviews with some juice to them! =)

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 03/04/07 15:36
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Hmmm... I don't think I have ever seen a story written like that. The birds chripping did send a hidden message when they went back to chirpping. Was that intended? I look foward to reading the rest of the other story and this one. Take care

Author's Response: Well, the birds were chirping and the crickets chirruping, but everybody gets a different hidden message from them =) It was partly intended. Thank you for letting me know your thoughts on Conan!

Reviewer: ravenclaw_rox
Date: 03/01/07 20:04
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Great job! Sad that he thought the burned body was a log, though. Great, awesome! Please update soon, this is a bery interesting beginning and I would like to read more.

Author's Response: I won't be updating this story until I finish my other one, but I like to let people know about it =) Very glad you enjoyed it and I hope you can wait! Thanks for the review =D

Reviewer: Felton_Fan_For_Life
Date: 02/28/07 16:30
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Ooooh, very intriguing. So is Behind thise Emerald Eyes. I can't wait for the first 'real' chapter!!
Much Love,
Felton_Fan_For_Life

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for both of the compliments! =) I love the word intriguing!

Reviewer: casiopeia
Date: 02/27/07 20:19
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

AWESOME! Nice writing! The images were so real - I loved it. (Finish that first story, please! But I will look for this one, too!

Author's Response: Haha! No worries =) I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this! I love imagery!!

Reviewer: magickid5
Date: 02/21/07 23:12
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

i really like it so far but i would like to know who the woman was.

Author's Response: The woman is simply the baby's mother, she isn't an obscure canon character or anything. Really glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know! =)

Reviewer: Caden Xander
Date: 01/24/07 20:31
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

I'm rather impressed by it. I really like it. Inspired me really, and wondering if you'd like to hear me out on some ideas about some things.

Author's Response: I would LOVE to hear you out on some things. Email me at notofthisworld_5@yahoo.com. Looking forward to hearing from you!

Reviewer: Ginnys_twin
Date: 01/23/07 18:51
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Great beginning, I can't wait to read the rest! I love your writing style and creativity; keep it up!

Author's Response: You reviewed and didn't tell me you did!!! Haha =) But I found it anyway! HAHAHAHA!!! *sheepish grin*....hehehe..... <3ness

Author's Response: Oh yeah, and thanks for the plentiful compiments! =D

Reviewer: Chris Arin
Date: 01/22/07 20:33
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

i must say this story is alot better than ur other one. this one looks almost EXACTLY in my mind as i imagine a movie would. its amazing. plz plz PLZ post a new chapter ASAP.

God Bless,
Chris Arin

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment! I practically feel humbled! I love films becuase it's imagination come alive, and I did try to get that across in this prologue! So glad to know its working! =)
I kind of like this story better as well, because since I don't have any canon characters, it's much more creative and I have more free will.
The first chapter won't be up for awhile though -- I'm very busy and need to post a new chapter for Emerald Eyes first, as I've promised my readers. But thank you so much for reviewing! I'm thrilled you enjoyed Conan =)
God Bless,
Lanelle

Reviewer: Elyas
Date: 01/12/07 20:37
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Great start on this one. I'm looking forward to see how it will on pan out. Since you chose the new *father* figure for the boy to be a priest, how is that going to work out when they discover that Conan is magical? Are you going to avoid it or maybe just address it some other way? I'm just curious; not may writers in the Harry Potter world include religious figures in thier writing. Is Scotland significant? Anyway, those are my thoughts . . . I'm really liking how you hooked me on this one. Keep up with "Emreld Eyes", then get to work! Mordom.

Author's Response: I'm taking my story in a different direction than most other stories with a noncanon original magical character. In this case, the boy will not be attending a magical school due to...something I can't tell you, haha =) The priest does raise him and influence the boy to a certain extent, but this is not a "priase the Lord Almighty and convert readers" kind of story. It just deals with morals, etc. Scotland is not significant, but I adore Scotland, so hence the setting =) Glad you enjoyed Conan so much!!! I love getting reviews from you! Haha =D Mordom.

Reviewer: katpay78232
Date: 01/09/07 20:12
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

good job

Author's Response: Glad you liked it =) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nysuperstarz
Date: 01/09/07 20:04
Chapter: Prologue: "...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

I loooved it! It was beautifully written and the imagery was absolutely amazing. You can tell the effort you put into it, it flowed very well and it just fit. I wonder who the baby and the woman and everyone was though, they seemed interesting and I want to know what happens next!

The onomotiopia (spelling?) is also a great little consistency that helps to pull the story together.

It's a really great beginning and the writing style is amazing. I can't wait till the the next chapter! Over-all, great job!

*hugs*

~Roop

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Compliments are always welcome =) The woman won't really be explained at all, so if you didn't figure it out already the woman was the baby's mother and her companion the father, so the baby's parents are dead (I know, it's sad). Glad you hear you're looking forward to the first real chapter! but it won't be up until I finish my other story, hate to say. Unless I just get in a Scotland mood, haha =D "The writing style is amazing." *major blushing* I feel so humbled! *hugs* -Lanelle a.k.a makinmagic323 NOW a.k.a amazon on forums =)

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