Reviews For What Lies Ahead
Reviewer: scotlandizdabest
Date: 02/26/07 13:29
Chapter: St. Mungo's

Oooo i really can't wait for the next chapter! Well i've added this story to my favourites because i can't wait ot read the next bit!! Another excellent chapter, well done xx

Author's Response: yay!! my stories in someone's favorites!!! i promise i will update soon! Thanks for all your reviews!

Reviewer: scotlandizdabest
Date: 02/26/07 13:25
Chapter: The Final Battle

Oh MY GOD! What a dramatic story! I really loved the bit with Ginny and Harry! You really love writing chapters with cliff hanger!!! Really good chapter and really enjoyed it! Can't wait to read next chapter! xx

Author's Response: Love them cliff hangers! haha. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: scotlandizdabest
Date: 02/26/07 13:21
Chapter: The Party

Oooh haven't enough time to review! Em in very quick words (as eager to read next chapter very badly!) excellent first cahpter but you left a cliff hanger and absolutely desperate to read on! Well done xx

Author's Response: haha read on!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/26/07 12:40
Chapter: St. Mungo's

Good story but it seems a little rushed.

Author's Response: yeah i do feel like its rushing a little... im trying to get into a "flow" lol if thats what you wanna call it? lol well thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 02/23/07 17:34
Chapter: St. Mungo's


Author's Response: hahah sorry guys im weird and left random review for myself lol. yeah sorry about my randomness.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood3
Date: 02/04/07 22:58
Chapter: The Final Battle

So I'm getting the idea Harry AND Voldemort died. The latter I don't care but Harry...*tear, tear*

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood3
Date: 02/04/07 22:53
Chapter: The Final Battle

So I'm getting the idea Harry AND Voldemort died. The latter I don't care but Harry...*tear, tear*

Author's Response: we'll just have to wait and see...

Reviewer: PotterFreak087
Date: 01/29/07 19:02
Chapter: The Final Battle

This is the second cruddy time I've had to write this review because my computer died. Okay, anyhow. Be prepared for my rambling.

Yes, shock is a perfect word for how I feel after reading this. GINNY WAS SO CRUDDY CLOSE TO DYING IT MADE MY HEAD HURT!!! Well, there's always the hippogriff accident.

And then there's you and your cliffhangers (sigh). YOU'VE GOTTA KEEP WRITING! I know where you live you know...and I found my "wand" my parents got me for Christmas a couple years ago. FEAR ME! Ha ha, kidding.

I like how you voiced Voldemort, he reminded me of my favorite character in Swords who's name I won't share. I'm overly fond of him like the briliant Rowling is overly fond of the HP series. Which is good.

Keep writing (or else!)
-Yours truly

Author's Response: WILL YOU STOP WITH THE BLOODY HIPOGRIFF RAMPAGE SCENARIO?!?!?!?!?!? seriously alexis i dont know what your problem is with Ginny... lets get one thing straight.... Ginny is not going to die in my fanfiction or in Deathly Hallows! so get over it! as for your un-named charactor in swords... if you need help writing it, i am your girl! thats why you need to invite me over soon for HP and COOKIES! lol yay the wand! i remember it! now we can curse eachother! just kidding... thats a little weird! ~~~Leah~~~

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 01/24/07 19:47
Chapter: The Final Battle

Wow. Nice battle sequence and a really heroic ending. Go, Harry!

Author's Response: haha... GO HARRY! thanks for the review! glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Zoltan42
Date: 01/24/07 11:38
Chapter: The Final Battle

I don't see anything about Harry nor Voldemort getting a new wand. If they didn't then if they each cast Avada Kedavra at the same time, the Priori Incantatem affect would have kicked in.

"In the midst of naught but a few seconds..." seems to imply that Harry cast it first, there is a lag, and Voldemort cast his. However, given what we've seen of the curse, it would seem that the curse would have hit Voldemort before he was able to cast his. I mean, if Voldemort had time to know what was coming, throw Ginny away, and cast his own curse, I would imagine there would be enough time for Harry's to reach him or Harry to get out of the way of Voldemort's curse.

Author's Response: well you'll just have to see what happens next.

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 01/23/07 21:25
Chapter: The Final Battle

I did NOT see that one coming!
Quick, write more so I can know what really happened!

Author's Response: lol. thanks for the review! glad you liked it... i'll update soon! i promise! haha

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 01/23/07 13:36
Chapter: The Final Battle

:jaw drops and I sit here looking like an idiot:
Wow, thats some pretty quick reflexes there. lol.
I can't believe, wait, maybe its not what I think it is. I'll wait to find out is I'm right or not to tell what I can't believe. I mean, two bodies might not mean who I think it is.
I'm really enjoying this story so far. :)

Author's Response: glad you like it!! remember, there were three people in the little ring there... so you never know. We'll have to wait and find out!!! thanks for the review.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 01/23/07 13:26
Chapter: The Final Battle

Wow ,Please send you next chapter as soon as possible.This is very good.Keep writing.

Author's Response: thank you thank you. glad you like it! and please tell me if i have any mistakes or anything... dont be afraid to be critical, it helps actually.

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 01/22/07 23:16
Chapter: The Final Battle

Gah!! What?!? EEEEEEEE

Author's Response: haha thanks for the review.

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 01/13/07 10:05
Chapter: The Party

Was the question to marry Harry?
I wanna know!
Update soon!
I loved it!

Author's Response: haha i we'll just have to wait for the update to figure that out now wont we? dont worry, i already have to chapter written i just have to submit it... hope fully its up soon!! thanks for the review!

Author's Response: woops a couple mistakes up there in that paragraph... forget the i.. its just we'll and for the the to... its just the. lol woops.

Reviewer: PotterFreak087
Date: 01/12/07 15:08
Chapter: The Party

Okay, yeah, it's me...I guess you know that already though...Heh heh. Review time! (Oh, and by the way, thanks for writing another fanfiction...I'm slowly whittling away at mine.)

Another awesome story from you! If I weren't so totally lighthearted about this stuff I'd probably hurt you for the ending...I'm like dying to know what happens now. TYPE FOR YOUR LIFE!! Ha ha! I like how you...portrayed...Lupin, it gives a nice insight there.

Other than how Harry and Ginny got back together, everything is awesome!

See you later!

Author's Response: yay its alexis! lol... gosh why cant you just be happy for harry and ginny, you are so mean... gosh alexis, everyday! anyway, thanks for the review... i knew you would like that cliffie of mine.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 01/12/07 1:02
Chapter: The Party

What are you waiting for.I want the next chapters now.Just kiding,you have made a very good start up to now.Keep writing that way.

Author's Response: haha i already have the second chapter written, i just have to type it up and submit it! be patient, hopfully it will be here within two weeks (or less! haha). thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wishmyhairwasred
Date: 01/11/07 23:17
Chapter: The Party

YEAH! first review! This is my first first review ever! and ur first review to get too..unless uv written another story. Anywho, enought rambling--good start! i wish you would expand a little on how Ginny and Harry still ended up together even though they broke up at the funeral--i want some more back ground info. Great suspense/cliffie.
come read my story!!

Author's Response: well this isnt my first review ever... i used to have another story, but i didnt really like it so i deleted it. anyway, thanks for the review and i will definetly check out your story! im on my way!

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