PLEASE UPDATE! WHAT A WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!!!! CUTE!
Yo thats Crazii! He seriously just kissed him! i lyk how u made him all mysterious, lyk he wanted to talk but he ended up kissing him. that was phat! wat else is on the list?? update soon plzz!
Excellent story, very well written, I'm ensared! Please write more soon!
this is great, definatly reading more of your fan fics.
Wat were Hr n G talkin bout? what dus the paper say? wats with Dracos list?
Wow. You have a good start here with the action. It seems a bit disjointed at first, but I love the way you write. It's very descriptive, and detailed like when you describe Bellatrix's blackness.
I also think the last sentences is very good: And so, consumed completely by a kind of evil he had never known before, Harry Potter crossed the final threshold between innocence and darkness.
It's very poetic...Harry crossing a threshold between innocence and darkness. *sigh*
It's sad that you killed off Mr. and Mrs. Weasley though, but I guess it was necessary for the feeling of the story.
I love your Dramione stories, and since I've recently began reading slash, I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.
Very good job, Annie.
~mugglemathdork/Knight of the Turnip Table
Poor confused Harry! I wonder what he'll do?
Please write more soon! :) i absolutely love this story! its great that you didnt just rush through it. i like that you acctually took time to explain everything and didnt just rush through it. i was soo shocked when draco kissed harry! that was the perfect time to make it happen though! :D and i was so sad when i found out draco was writing a list of things he has to do before he dies, thats so sad! gosh i cant wait until you write more! your writing is so perfect, hope to read more soon (CANT WAIT!) =].
kl chapter can't wait 4 the nxt :D
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OOO is it a 'things to do before I die' list? Another awesome chapter :-)
This chapter was great! i love the part: "Malfoy will be entertaining at least, he thought dully."
you write malfoy really well!
This chapter was great! i love the part: "Malfoy will be entertaining at least, he thought dully."
you write malfoy really well!
Oh! Please continue! I'm dying to know what happens. This is an excellent story! Great job.
Oooh, very nicely written. Not too much happened in this chapter, but it still left me with a few questions. But that's a good thing. Anyways, keep up th good work and udate soon!!
Felton_Fan_For_Life
v gr8 chapetr
loved the whole conversation bits....deep!!! lol
cant wait 4 the nxt
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wow
you are such an amazing writer! i've already read two of your other fics a thousand words [waiting for the update on that! :)] and the sweetest sin and i loved both of them!
when you write it all just seems to flow together and it keeps me interested.
i personally love Draco/ Harry fics its my favorite slash fic so i'm really excited to see how this one goes. i love how you protreyed Draco and even Harry.
Great work!
So, I definately miss being updated on LiveJournal. Sometimes it makes me want to cry.
I love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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