Reviewer: JFig
Date: 08/12/07 21:27
Chapter: An Angel

Daaaaaaaaaaamn. That was really really scary. And just.. insanely good. Wow. The details were incredible, and I like the idea of that curse (in a really morbid way). Just.. wow. Definately worth the wait.

-JFig

Author's Response: Thanks again for the review here, Julia!

Reviewer: num
Date: 08/12/07 18:49
Chapter: An Angel

More brilliant writing

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lee_chic
Date: 08/12/07 16:04
Chapter: An Angel

VERY intense chapter. VERY. Really interesting and I am so desperate to read more right now. I'm excited. I love how you decribe things, even Draco's pain, because your words are amazing.

'He wanted to touch it with a desperation that burned hotter than the inferno below him and brighter than the darkness around him, so he fought through shadows and blood and the thick, heavy feeling of shame to reach it.'

Even just that is amazing. You are extremly talented. I cannot wait for the next!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried that I wasn't making it intense *enough*, but now I'm more worried that I made it *too* intense :P And I'm glad that you like that line, because the dream sequence took me days to write and edit until it was the way I wanted it to be!

Reviewer: cutiemimi4
Date: 08/09/07 22:32
Chapter: A Whim

wowwwwwwww!!!!

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/03/07 8:41
Chapter: A Realisation

Very good
I love your stories
I have read nearly all of them i think
=]
I specially liked your most recent
'After the Epilogue'
I am writing my own version of after the end
but yours trumped mine
=] lol
M fave story on this site
well done and keep up the gd work! =]


*SH*

Reviewer: Ryuichi Sakuma
Date: 08/02/07 4:14
Chapter: A Word

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm spellbound!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 07/24/07 11:04
Chapter: A Realisation

Aww...don't kill Draco after school!

Come on, you can get him off. I know you can. xD

I love this story, it is my absolute favorite Harry/Draco. Hope there's a new part when the site opens up again!

Reviewer: Alovestainedwhisper
Date: 07/23/07 23:11
Chapter: A Whim

Draco Malfoy whats your problem? Your Looking kind of moupy and fowrlorn this morning. Harry Potter whats your deal?Are you having trouble with the feelings that you feel?Draco Malfoy whats your issue?Do you need a hug or maybe a tissue?Harry Potter give us a sign, cant commit to Ginny so what do you have in mind?Give me three guesses...is it Professor Mcgonnagol?Is it Lavendar Brown? No it's Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G, its draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love. ...In love.. ....In love. Draco Malfoy level with me, used to be so enthralled with pansy. Harry Potter dont be shy got no luck with women so perhaps you need a guy?There's nothing wrong with it, no there's nothing wrong with it. You can move to Massachussets where it will be Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G its Draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love.....

the whomping willos, Draco and Harry

thought it fit love the story!

Reviewer: Alovestainedwhisper
Date: 07/23/07 23:11
Chapter: A Whim

Draco Malfoy whats your problem? Your Looking kind of moupy and fowrlorn this morning. Harry Potter whats your deal?Are you having trouble with the feelings that you feel?Draco Malfoy whats your issue?Do you need a hug or maybe a tissue?Harry Potter give us a sign, cant commit to Ginny so what do you have in mind?Give me three guesses...is it Professor Mcgonnagol?Is it Lavendar Brown? No it's Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G, its draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love. ...In love.. ....In love. Draco Malfoy level with me, used to be so enthralled with pansy. Harry Potter dont be shy got no luck with women so perhaps you need a guy?There's nothing wrong with it, no there's nothing wrong with it. You can move to Massachussets where it will be Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G its Draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love.....

the whomping willos, Draco and Harry

thought it fit love the story!

Reviewer: Alovestainedwhisper
Date: 07/23/07 23:10
Chapter: A Word

Draco Malfoy whats your problem? Your Looking kind of moupy and fowrlorn this morning. Harry Potter whats your deal?Are you having trouble with the feelings that you feel?Draco Malfoy whats your issue?Do you need a hug or maybe a tissue?Harry Potter give us a sign, cant commit to Ginny so what do you have in mind?Give me three guesses...is it Professor Mcgonnagol?Is it Lavendar Brown? No it's Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G, its draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love. ...In love.. ....In love. Draco Malfoy level with me, used to be so enthralled with pansy. Harry Potter dont be shy got no luck with women so perhaps you need a guy?There's nothing wrong with it, no there's nothing wrong with it. You can move to Massachussets where it will be Draco and Harry sitting in a tree S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G its Draco and Harry sitting in a tree F-A-L-L-I-N-G in love.....

the whomping willos, Draco and Harry

Reviewer: num
Date: 07/15/07 18:49
Chapter: A Realisation

Awesome! Your characters are very believable

Reviewer: blondepotterfan10
Date: 07/14/07 23:31
Chapter: A Realisation

You have good taste. I like this stroy. IT ROCKS!

Reviewer: alphonse_elric
Date: 07/14/07 11:40
Chapter: A Realisation

I really did not like the OotP movie either....Wonderful chapter though, as soon as I get DH, i will start on it, and be done the next day, then cursing the MNFF queues for being closed!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 07/14/07 11:20
Chapter: A Realisation

wow. awesome story as usual. i hate that the site is closing down for awhile....oh well. hopefully you'll have another part of the story up when its back! =]

Reviewer: faolan63
Date: 07/14/07 7:15
Chapter: A Realisation

I'm really really liking this story, it's creative and I like that Malfoy is the one that makes Harry see reason, albeit accidentally.

Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: serpent_child
Date: 07/05/07 23:53
Chapter: A Confrontation

hey!
where's the rest?
come on, post it!
pleez?

Reviewer: goodmissgood
Date: 07/04/07 6:12
Chapter: A Conversation

I love it.

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 06/26/07 16:47
Chapter: A Conversation

I really like your style of writing, it flows so well and makes the story really enjoyable to read. I loved this bit:

'Everything — the way Potter shook his hair out of his eyes as he stood up, the way Potter walked with his hands shoved in his pockets and his shoulders slightly slumped forward, the way Potter scratched the back of his head as he debated what to purchase, even the items Potter bought off the cart (one cauldron cake, four chocolate frogs, and a pack of Bertie Bott’s Every Flavour Beans) — was perceived and memorised. It was as if Draco had lost the innate ability to filter out the unnecessary aspects of his surroundings.'

Reviewer: Katiloo
Date: 06/26/07 15:32
Chapter: A Confrontation

Holy crap. I started the at the prologue (obviously) and I couldn't stop reading til I got to the end. Your writing is very good...descriptive, but not overly so. =) Your word choice is phenominal and your conventions are pretty much accurate, which is good because nothing is more annoying than bad grammar.

I can't wait for the next part. ^_^

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 06/26/07 9:45
Chapter: A Confrontation

This is so, so good. It's killing me (almost) how cold Draco can be! Betrayal was the perfect word. Keep this up!! I'll try to help with any writer's block you have.

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