Reviewer: specialgirlvihas
Date: 09/07/07 8:40
Chapter: Prologue

THis story is really really cool!! i was really impressed! its really good. very carefully worded to give just the right impression to the readers! cant wait 4 more!!

Reviewer: num
Date: 09/07/07 8:36
Chapter: A Favour

Brilliant! I love the way you describe Harry's growing affection for Malfoy.

Reviewer: SkivingSnackbox13
Date: 09/04/07 20:02
Chapter: A Helping Hand

I really like this story. It's not cheesy or anything. It's very believable to people who KNOW how much Harry and Draco hate each other. Their friendship and everything slowly forming just makes it seem very realistic. I love it!

And with that, Draco bid a silent farewell to his comfortable world of solitude. From that moment on, it would have to make room for Potter.

That is my FAVORITE line so far. =]
very emotional.

I hope you update soon! :D

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 09/03/07 19:52
Chapter: A Helping Hand

Wow, I must say, I don't regret spending hours sitting at my computer reading the whole thing in one go. I love the hostile banter, classic. You've done such a wonderful job recreating all of the characters. And I love how slowly you're taking this. "Slow-burners" are so much more enjoyable. A rush to the romance devalues it, in the end. I can't wait for an update :)

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 09/02/07 7:46
Chapter: A Helping Hand

This is really good
you updated quickly

I am impressed!
Update soon again
and deliver us another great chapter
as usual
Welll done!!!


Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 08/29/07 22:35
Chapter: A Helping Hand

oh! One more thing...


think of a way to save him! :D
Or else....we readers will team together and write our OWN ending where he lives and its a happy ending!


Have a good day.

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 08/29/07 22:24
Chapter: A Helping Hand

OMG!!!! I LOVE this story! more super soon! xD this story gets me away from my mountainload of school work i have to do.

lol i loved Harry's comment, "Just because you don’t have a chance of spending the night with me doesn’t mean you need to take it out on other people"

Lmao, I almost fell off my bed laughing. I'm guessing thats why Malfoy is mad at him? :P

Seriously though, you save me from boredom. more asap please!

Reviewer: Tom Piper
Date: 08/29/07 11:38
Chapter: Prologue

I absolutely loved every single minute of it. Stayed up all night to read it. If I were a book publisher and I could legally publish this, I would. I VERY eagerly await the following chapter(s).

Keep it up!

Reviewer: Lee_chic
Date: 08/29/07 11:19
Chapter: A Helping Hand

Ah, so exciting! I love the Draco/Harry interaction, it's really realistic and well written. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: GinnyWeasley557
Date: 08/29/07 9:11
Chapter: A Helping Hand

It's so awesome,I love your updates! So when well there be any DM/HP action?

Reviewer: faolan63
Date: 08/29/07 4:49
Chapter: A Helping Hand

I'm so glad that there is real quality to this fic; you've worded everything really well, grammar and spelling and everything little are all great.
I can't wait to see what else happens! ;]

Reviewer: num
Date: 08/29/07 2:53
Chapter: A Helping Hand

Brilliant. Brilliant. Brilliant. What more can I say? You're a wonderful writer and this story does you full justice.

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 08/29/07 0:12
Chapter: A Helping Hand

I'm loving the lengths of these chapters.
I'm also loving the fact that all I can think about is how realistically slow this Harry/Draco thing will take. And then I laugh at myself, because I'm calling Harry Potter realistic.

I love this story.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 08/28/07 23:31
Chapter: A Helping Hand

It's graet that you put so much into your writing. Today i realized that there are only 11 chapters yet I feel as if I've read 20! Keep up the great work

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 08/28/07 23:31
Chapter: A Helping Hand

It's graet that you put so much into your writing. Today i realized that there are only 11 chapters yet I feel as if I've read 20! Keep up the great work

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/22/07 13:05
Chapter: Prologue

Oh i get it now
That makes more

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/19/07 12:44
Chapter: An Angel

This was a really good chapter
My favourite so far

I didnt get this bit though

…Blood, innocent blood, scarlet pools filling every little crevice, every little dip in the earth… Harry couldn’t breathe… was going to faint… Neville was dead…

Did you mean Malfoy or did i just not understand?


Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it! And the italicised part is actually a flashback to a moment during the war when Neville died... Seeing all of Draco's blood triggered the memory.

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 08/14/07 18:23
Chapter: An Angel


Same here on the betaing.
I could be a beta =]
I've helped beta some friends stories, and I'd like to think im pretty good.

Email me xD

Author's Response: Aww, well, like I told Angelique, I recently found a beta, but if I ever need your help, I'll definitely contact you :) Thanks for the offer, though!

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 08/14/07 18:21
Chapter: An Angel

ahhh!!!!! I LOVE it! xD

More More MORE! Soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it :) And more should be coming soon!

Reviewer: GinnyWeasley557
Date: 08/14/07 6:58
Chapter: An Angel

YES YES YES!! A wonderful update if I do say so myself annie!
A little bit of Harry/Draco action going on there,But not alot.And The way you closed up the chapter was amazing.You said your looking for a beta?
Well,I could do it.I have nothing else to do.And I'd be happy to do It.Bored outta my skull here!!
Get back to me on that one...

A Devoted Fan,

Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you again for the beta offer, but I'm afraid I've already found another beta reader... I'll definitely contact you in the future if I ever need a beta, though :)

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