Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 10/02/07 20:56
Chapter: A Wish

OH MY GOD. That was such an amazing chapter. I'm loving the Draco/ Harry interactions. Ah, I'm so excited right now, you simply must update as soon as possible! :)

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 09/27/07 15:01
Chapter: A Game

I LOVE that song at the beginning

Reviewer: Tom Piper
Date: 09/23/07 10:40
Chapter: A Game

Another astoundingly good chapter. I will be constantly checking for the next instalment.

Reviewer: RachelR82
Date: 09/23/07 10:28
Chapter: A Game

Oh my... this story is so darn good! I love the direction you are going with this. How long has Draco known he liked Harry? Update soon!

Reviewer: goodmissgood
Date: 09/22/07 7:03
Chapter: A Game

I've enjoyed this story so much. I check for new additions every time I'm on.

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 09/19/07 15:51
Chapter: A Game

! Love it! Amazing! I love the subtle physical contact. Your writing is AWESOME. Im expecting more, SOON! =]

Reviewer: kwijiborjt
Date: 09/18/07 13:23
Chapter: A Game

I love this story... it's compelling and long and such a tease! The subtlety of their emotions makes this fic very compelling. It doesn't hurt that i love Harry/Draco stories anyway, but this one is particularly great. I feel so invested in it that i'm excited and curious about how it's going to end! The AU throws me off sometimes, but given the context in which the story was written i understand that it was unavoidable.

Thanks and please keep writing!

Reviewer: Lapislazuli
Date: 09/18/07 10:21
Chapter: A Game

@JFig: Can't you guess what Harry asked Dobby to do?
My guessing: He has set Dobby on the task to find the Mist Lily and bring it to him.
"If you can, start after we go, okay? Oh, and if you find it, give it to me and not him. You can just leave it on my bed."
Ah, and he himself wants to give the flowers to Draco ;-) (oh Harry, so sweeeeeet!) .

@Annie: I started to translate the first chapters, but it's really difficult to stay on the task when the following ones are SO exciting...

They are really cute, the two of them.

"Draco managed to keep up the pretence of being unaffected by the brief skin-to-skin contact, but he couldn’t help wondering if Harry’s heartbeat had suddenly tripled, too."
Olala, Mr Malfoy... ^^

The thing I'm absolutely not sure about: Are they BOTH completely clueless to what's going on?

It's great that your updates come so quickly. I'm dying to to read what's going to happen next...

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 09/18/07 4:53
Chapter: A Game

I realized that my last few reviews have been on your writing, and not really on the plot. (Not that I think it's a bad thing, I just wanted to clarify.) Anyways, I love the idea of The Game, and that Draco was going to go outside in the snow again. The Mist Lily is intriguing.. maybe it's just me, but the fact that "Lily" is in the title makes me think that Harry's going to have a key role with it. Or maybe it's the fact that it's a H/D fic. Either way..
Harry closing Draco's mouth was hysterical and unexpected, and I'm dying to know what he asked Dobby to do. Lovely, lovely job on this chapter!

Reviewer: sahra rose
Date: 09/17/07 17:53
Chapter: A Game

This was a wonderful chapter! I really like this story, it's realistic slash, something that could possibly happen, and that's the best kind of fanfic you can read. Love the story, keep updating!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 09/17/07 16:48
Chapter: A Game

Wow. You know it was a good chapter when your review threatens to be an entire page worth, so I'll keep it short. I love how they're warming up to each other, and the incidental physical contact just gets me all kinds of excited. Please update, I can't wait to know what happens next :)

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 09/16/07 22:42
Chapter: A Favour

...why did the last paragraph of the chapter disappear?...

Reviewer: frosteh
Date: 09/14/07 3:36
Chapter: A Favour

best effing series ever. xD
hurry up and get it finished. D;

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 09/12/07 11:52
Chapter: A Favour

You know I love this, right?
Well I do :-)
Love Harrys growing feelings for draco...Sweet!
Can't wait to find out about what happens at azkaban prison!
Update soon


Reviewer: charz4evaSlytherin
Date: 09/09/07 16:12
Chapter: A Favour

This is fantastic! The first fan fiction I ever read, and by far it's still the best. This is like the only 11 chaptered fan fiction I can read all the way through without getting bored. It's really gripping stuff. I hope you continue the story as I can't wait to find out what happens when Harry takes Draco to Azkaban. Thanks for writing it. :)

Reviewer: Lapislazuli
Date: 09/09/07 9:34
Chapter: A Favour

Wow, what a story...
I never thought I would actually like a Slash-Story, but it's really nicely written - not the usual "I hate you!" "I hate you, too!" and then "Kiss!".
But caution: Draco ist getting to weak ;-).

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 09/08/07 23:20
Chapter: A Favour

oooooooo it's getting hotter in here!

Reviewer: mbailey1417
Date: 09/08/07 19:49
Chapter: A Favour

HA! Oh, fat lady and her cheekiness...

Reviewer: emolove182
Date: 09/07/07 19:08
Chapter: A Favour


i absolutley love this story!

You're so good at writing!


im jealous

its getting so good

wheee!! i cant wait!!

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 09/07/07 17:48
Chapter: A Favour

Yes! I LOVE it! Especially the last few paragraphs.

There was a long, drawn-out pause, during which Harry stared at Malfoy and Malfoy stared back. Then Malfoy took a step towards Harry so that their faces were mere centimetres apart and said, with such obvious sincerity that it sent a chill down Harry’s spine, “You’re braver than I thought you were, Potter.”

Harry managed a smile. They were so close that he could feel Malfoy’s warm breath on his lips, could see that his grey eyes were void of malice for the first time Harry could remember, but before he could figure out why these small details stirred up a sudden cloud of butterflies in his stomach, Malfoy stepped back, turned, and walked briskly around the bend.

That is AMAZING writing. =]
Write more soon! Until then, I will continue to read this chapter repeatedly.

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