Reviewer: leigh194
Date: 09/16/07 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Hufflepuff's Cup

hi, just finished reading your fan fic and have so far enjoyed reading it. the only thing i didn't like about chapter 22 is that i don't think anangog would side with voldermort as this would be like betraying hagrid but i can see why he might do it if voldermort offered his offspring freedom. so yer am looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review leigh194, I really appreciate it! I can see where you're coming from with Anangog but more explanation will be coming later on, I promise. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 09/15/07 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

I'm betting the dark stranger Kreature talked about was Snape, he's still a good guy, and he's going to help Harry win!!! LOL!!! :D 10/10

Author's Response: That's a very interesting thought Pottergirl lol Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/11/07 10:51
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Hufflepuff's Cup

Okay, I am back now. I really didn’t think it would take this long to come back to finish, but, I am going to try to finish reading this chapter, and leaving my review.
I hope Remus isn’t the one. Please let it be someone else!
Centaurs are going to help? I was glad to see you kept Bane in character. I never liked him very much, but the others could be helpful when they actually felt like it.
Oh, why do they have to show up there too? Bella and company have got to be getting their information from the picture. It is the only thing that makes sense.
What arrangement have they made with the Acromantulas?
I know Ron is trying to give Harry time to get to the one in the water, but that was a bit reckless. He’s acting more and more like Harry.
Apparition isn’t possible on the grounds, and technically, they are still on the grounds right?
Oh, now I am happy. No ‘Follow the butterflies’ but the Anglia comes back, great job!
Thank you so much for the laughs in this one. I know it wasn’t all funny, but the parts that were still have a smile on my face.
Excellent writing as usual, and I really want the next chapter to validate so I can see what happens next.
On a selfish note, my ch.2 and ch.3 are up. See you for chapter twenty-three.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a great review, red haired mom! I’m really glad that you liked it! First off, asking Hagrid would make a lot of sense and save time, but I think you’ll begin to notice that Harry feels that he’s better off involving as few people as he can. This also shows up in later chapters. That’s a very interesting theory about the picture leading the Death Eaters to Harry… I’ll tell you that there are subtle clues that would answer whether or not this theory is correct but I’m not saying here lol. I’ve been getting a lot of people who don’t want the spy to be Remus either but you’ll just have to wait until the end to find out… again, sorry lol. As for the Centaurs, I really wanted to show that there was some hope still left for Harry and by having them say that they’ll be there to help Harry gave Harry that little ray of hope. As for Apparation, there technically not on Hogwarts grounds anymore… there actually a good ways away from Hogwarts, deep in the Forest, but the Ministry extended its protection which made it impossible for them to Disapparate. And yes, sorry for no ‘follow the butterflies’ but I’m glad you liked that the Anglia came back and saved them. All in all, thanks for such a great review and I’ll be sure to check out your story as well. See you at the next one

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 09/11/07 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Hufflepuff's Cup

Awesome Chapter. I cannot wait for the next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jameswys, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 09/10/07 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

Great Chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Neville_Is_My_Hero
Date: 09/10/07 19:58
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Hufflepuff's Cup

love it ir really want to know what happens. Please put more R/Hr moments i love those

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Neville_Is_My_Hero! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/10/07 13:49
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Hufflepuff's Cup

I had wondered why Luna was wandering around. Good reasoning.
Lots of questions popping up, and very good ones at that.
Asking Ron if he remembers something that happened while he was panicking doesn’t seem like the wisest thing to do. But then again, if Harry remembers it the same way, it must be the right way. Wow, they aren’t there? Where did they go, and why?
Instead of spending the next few weeks in the forest, I would have gone to ask Hagrid where they were.
I have a theory, the picture Harry and Ginny use is where the Death Eater’s are getting the information. There is no way I will believe Remus is the spy, nope, not gonna believe it.
Oops, gotta run, be back in a bit for the rest…


Author's Response: I'll respond up top :)

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/07/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

Interesting tale the one from Kreacher.
Can't wait for the rest. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks Ginny Guerra! I really appreciate the review :)

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 09/05/07 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

Well developed!

Author's Response: Thanks Hestia Jones! I really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/05/07 10:33
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

Oh my word, Kreacher being nice to all three of them. Will wonders never cease?
With Kreacher waiting for Harry in the Room of Requirement, it seems like he would have been able to go to Harry when he was called. You have me a little perplexed with this one. I have to admit, I love a good mystery, and you are doing very well considering this isn’t a mystery.
Giving and receiving explanations cleared up a few points, but Ron always seems to hyper focus on the wrong things. Of course, he has done that throughout all seven books, so I can’t see any reason for him to change in many fanfics.
Having to go into the forest for Acromantula Venom should give him something else to focus on now though. I can’t wait to see how he deals with them this time. I would love to see a reference to following the butterflies, but if it doesn’t happen, I will understand.
Hermione taking notes and keeping track of everything they are doing, just like Regulus did, fits so well into her personality. Never one to leave the details to chance, she will take notes, and refer to them as necessary so they don’t make too many mistakes.
Great job, I still don’t like Kreacher, but you did a great job with making him believable. Knowing how it happened in DH, I have to say I can’t wait to see who was in Grimmauld Place, and stunned Kreacher. Looking forward to the next chapter, and I was so glad to see you have written so far ahead. Can’t wait, see you at the next one…


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, red haired mom! I’m glad you liked it! To clear up a few things for you, Kreacher would have been able to go to Harry but he was following the instructions to stay put given to him by the person who Stunned him at Grimmauld Place. Think of it this way, and I haven’t mentioned this yet in the story… if Voldemort somehow found out that Kreacher knew about his Horcrux then Kreacher would be in danger, so the safest place to hide him would probably be at Hogwarts. A “follow the butterflies would have been awesome” but I already wrote (and posted on other sites shh!) the next chapter so it would be hard to change it now. I don’t like Kreacher much either, but when Harry told him that the locket was destroyed it would have meant that the final request from Regulus’ had been fulfilled, which makes Kreacher feel pretty good. Thanks, once again, for a great review, and I hope to see you after Chapter 22 :)

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 09/05/07 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey

Great Chapter! Though shouldn't Harry grab the Half-Blood Prince's potions book while he's there? Wuld be a good weapon against Snake Face

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review! It would make sense for Harry to grab the book but I would think that it would also bring back some bad memories for him. I mean, he loved the book when he had it only to find that it belonged to Snape. I just think he would have a hard time opening it again. Glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: HermioneIsLucky
Date: 08/25/07 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 20 - Secrets Revealed

is this the end it can't be right more plzzzz i'll die if i don't know what happens

Author's Response: This is not the end, don't worry :) The next chapter is in the queue and it should be up in no time. I also have 26 chapter written right now so there's much more to come.

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/23/07 11:56
Chapter: Chapter 20 - Secrets Revealed

still LOVIN the fic!!!! the only thing reminding me that this ISN'T the 7th harry potter book is that my copy of deathly hallows is sitting right next to me. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I so happy that you took the time to leave so many nice reviews! Be on the lookout for the next chapter shortly and thanks so so much again!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/23/07 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Through the Wardrobe

simply BRILLIANT!!!!!! i love the deja vu effect!!! WOW!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much! I feel bad saying the same thing everytime, but what can I really say! I thrilled that you're liking the story so far!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/23/07 11:18
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Riddle Orphanage

EXCITING!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/23/07 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Trial and Error

another fantastic chapter!!(sorry for the lack of reviews for a while by the way) you've truly captured the characters, especially ron. :) "we’d actually rather try the old fashion way first”, i can practically hear him saying it. great job, yet again!

Author's Response: Thanks again for the review, SammiCakes! Don't worry about not reviewing either... but I'm glad you have so far :)

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/22/07 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Birthday Surprises

yay!! another great chapter!!! it was completely superb!!!

Author's Response: I feel so repetative but thanks so much! I really appreciate that you took the time to review each chapter. It means a lot to me!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/22/07 14:07
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Revelations

i have but one word to say about this chapter:wow :D

Author's Response: I have one word too: Thanks! I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/22/07 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 5 - The Wedding

you can't see it but i'm applauding this chapter right now! spectacular work, yet again. :)

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm really glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: SammiCakes
Date: 08/22/07 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 4 - The Serpent's Eye

another fantabulous chapter!!! the story is coming along really well!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, SammiCakes! I'm glad that you're liking it so far :)

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