Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/05/07 15:37
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Betrayal

Okay, first, I think that this was all really rushed and am kind of lost as to what is really going on. Second, I hope the next few chapters explain a lot more because these two didn't really describe much of anything. Third, Ginny what????????? I know it's your story and you can do whatever you want with it but the thought of her finding someone else is just...just wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. The first three chapters are by far the shortest of the story. I have 17 chapters written as of now and all of the chapters after Chapter 3 average roughly 3500 words. Don't worry, everything will be explained and if it makes you feel better Ginny is one of my favorite characters so there must be some reason she found someone so quickly. Thanks again and hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 02/05/07 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Betrayal

whoo. that was intense. but i have a guess on who the boyfriend is... well sorta.

Author's Response: Lol i'll give you a clue... its an OC with a familiar last name. Thanks for the review and glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 01/13/07 12:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

Aw!
Love it!
Great start to an excellent story!
Update soon!
I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Update should be coming anyday now.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 01/10/07 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

Pretty good for a start.You seems to be a very good writer.Close to JK's characters.Keep it that way.I am waiting for the next chapter...very soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, I've tried to keep the characters as close as I can, I personally don't like to read stories where the characters do or say things that they never would. Thanks again for the review and the next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 01/09/07 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

OMG!!!! this is so goood

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 01/09/07 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

I really like it. It seems like JK herself wrote it. You're going on my faves list. (Consider that an honor since many of the Mods are on there with you!) ; )

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed and there's much more to come.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 01/09/07 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

This is looking good! Hurry with the updates, please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have about 11 or so chapters done so far so as soon as they're edited and have been appoved, they'll be up. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 01/09/07 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Return to Privet Drive

OO!!! I love it all ready!! Your characterisation of Harry was well done, as was that of Tonks. Very cool-if a bit short for my liking :) though i am never very good at waiting on cliffhangers. IT IS SOOO GINNY!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review! And dont worry, out of the 11 chapters i have written so far the first is by far the shortest. Thanks agian!

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