Tragic, cool, and awesome, but you got some of the dates wrong.1997 was when the war ended
* crying so sad but so beautiful* my heart broke for harry, beutiful story :)
This is the most moving story ever!! i dint cry when i watched the notebook or the titanic and i am currently typeing this with tears running down my cheeks...pleasse continue to write this is beautiful and wonderful and amazing and so much more
aww....i feel kinda sad tho i luved the story. thnx for an awesome fan fic~!!
That was a beautiful story!!!! :) :) it actually made me cry! u hav a gift! use it!
='( aw thats soo sad. it was really good though.
i never thought it was possible for me to start crying a river at a story less than 10000 words long until now....
i never thought it was possible for me to start crying a river at a story less than 10000 words long until now....
this story is a tearjerker i loved it.
lots of love
aawww! You made me cry, that was so beautiful!
awsome story! i really liked this. it made me cry!
:'( That's so sad... I love how you can make the story so short yet so detailed.
This is amazing - the flashback style is just awsome! And the plot - amazing, even though I felt that Ginny and Christina's deaths were really, really, sad. And I mean REALLY sad.
What I must point out, though, is that I feel that the flashback/current time changes are a little choppy, and both time "lapses" could have been lengthened to make a more detailed story.
Apart from that, this is really good story. The romance is subtle yet enhanced and you can really feel the love between the couple. I also think that the name of their daughter is really good!
Thanks,
Pepper Imp
This was a VERY good short story. In fact, it was the best one i have read! It actually brought me to tears. Keep up the good work and keep writing more stories! Maybe try a Hermione/Draco one. That would seem like a good place for you. Well, good luck
Love, Kacey
You have affectively reduced me to tears lol, not something thats easily done! Your writing is amazing, keep up the good work!
This was an OK story w/ an OK plot...I can't ever imagine Harry being an old man so that adds on to why this is an OK story. Also, I don't like how you made Ginny and their baby dead.