The whole story was very good.It doesn't need a sequel.
Author's Response: Alright. Thank you!
cute! and the slightest bit funny
Author's Response: Thanks!
Er, what was Lily's so special dare?
Author's Response: Huh? I'm sorry, but I don't think I remember what you're talking about.
brilliant. Loved the idea of the game, but who won?????
=P
Author's Response: Thank you. I never was really planning to have anyone win, they were all really just playing for fun.
haha. pretty good. but it seemed rather short.
Author's Response: Thanks!
what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*
Author's Response: :p
what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*
Author's Response: :D
what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*
Author's Response: :)
what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*
Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry about it ending.
A sequel sounds good to me. Marauder era fanfics are my favorite kind. Nice Job!
Author's Response: Okay, thank you!
hey, nice work! it was really funny!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Nice, but somehow a bit anticlimatic. Still a great idea, and a sequel would always be welcome.
Author's Response: I'm sorry if it disappointed you. Thanks for your opinion!
Haha shame! How did McGonagall find out?
Author's Response: I'm not sure, somebody was probably discussing it around her.
I loved the ending, i dont know if you should wright a secual though
Author's Response: Okay, thanks for your opinion!
that was an awesome storie im writing my own and when its on the site the name is forbidden love by rwluver
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! Good luck with your fic!
Haha. I laughed when they got detention. Stupid Snape to think they were behind the stunts.. actually they kind of were. Haha. UPDATE SOON. Please...? =D
Author's Response: No more updates, this was the final chapter. Sorry!
Sevy! Yay! *wiggle* I am so touched that you thought of me, Morgan, lol. *huggles*
So, yes, another wonderful chapter, and a good conclusion to the story. A nit-pick, though:
Just as the excite babble was beginning to die down, and students returning to their lunches- This should be 'excited babble. :)
Really not much more to say, I just wish it had been a little longer (more time for dear Severus, you see ;)), but otherwise found nothing to really quibble over. :D Excellent fic!
Author's Response: Awww. *huggles* I'm just glad you liked it. After all, what is a Marauder's era fic without at least one confrontation with Sevy?
Whoops. I'll go fix that now. Nice catch!
I know, ending (or at least mine) always seem short. lol. Thanks so much!
I love this story! I'm totally favoriting it. You're a good writer!
Author's Response: Wow, that's one of the nicest comments I've ever gotten! Thanks!
Hilarious! This is going on my favorates list!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad so many people like it enough to favorite it!
i really really liked it. I added it to my favorites!
Author's Response: :D
