Reviewer: Ariana
Date: 07/30/07 12:09
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

WOW this was great i really loved it =]]

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 07/30/07 9:14
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

hahaha!you're a genius!

Author's Response: Wow! That's a great compliment! Thanks!

Reviewer: mudbugsfan1996
Date: 07/27/07 10:44
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

The whole story was very good.It doesn't need a sequel.

Author's Response: Alright. Thank you!

Reviewer: this_is_mau
Date: 07/27/07 9:22
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

cute! and the slightest bit funny

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hazura_24
Date: 07/26/07 21:51
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

Er, what was Lily's so special dare?

Author's Response: Huh? I'm sorry, but I don't think I remember what you're talking about.

Reviewer: potterscouse
Date: 07/26/07 10:14
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

brilliant. Loved the idea of the game, but who won?????

Author's Response: Thank you. I never was really planning to have anyone win, they were all really just playing for fun.

Reviewer: tonksnlupin
Date: 07/23/07 19:52
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

haha. pretty good. but it seemed rather short.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 07/23/07 17:44
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*

Author's Response: :p

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 07/23/07 17:44
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 07/23/07 17:44
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 07/23/07 17:43
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

what????????? that's the end????????? *sighs*

Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry about it ending.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 07/23/07 13:32
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

A sequel sounds good to me. Marauder era fanfics are my favorite kind. Nice Job!

Author's Response: Okay, thank you!

Reviewer: dumbledorerocks
Date: 07/23/07 4:14
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

hey, nice work! it was really funny!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 07/21/07 19:22
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

Nice, but somehow a bit anticlimatic. Still a great idea, and a sequel would always be welcome.

Author's Response: I'm sorry if it disappointed you. Thanks for your opinion!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 07/21/07 17:33
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

Haha shame! How did McGonagall find out?

Author's Response: I'm not sure, somebody was probably discussing it around her.

Reviewer: flyingpizza
Date: 07/21/07 13:38
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

I loved the ending, i dont know if you should wright a secual though

Author's Response: Okay, thanks for your opinion!

Reviewer: rwluver
Date: 07/21/07 10:52
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

that was an awesome storie im writing my own and when its on the site the name is forbidden love by rwluver

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! Good luck with your fic!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 07/20/07 17:18
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

Haha. I laughed when they got detention. Stupid Snape to think they were behind the stunts.. actually they kind of were. Haha. UPDATE SOON. Please...? =D

Author's Response: No more updates, this was the final chapter. Sorry!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 07/20/07 15:55
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

Sevy! Yay! *wiggle* I am so touched that you thought of me, Morgan, lol. *huggles*

So, yes, another wonderful chapter, and a good conclusion to the story. A nit-pick, though:

Just as the excite babble was beginning to die down, and students returning to their lunches- This should be 'excited babble. :)

Really not much more to say, I just wish it had been a little longer (more time for dear Severus, you see ;)), but otherwise found nothing to really quibble over. :D Excellent fic!

Author's Response: Awww. *huggles* I'm just glad you liked it. After all, what is a Marauder's era fic without at least one confrontation with Sevy?

Whoops. I'll go fix that now. Nice catch!

I know, ending (or at least mine) always seem short. lol. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sunnyskygal
Date: 07/20/07 14:31
Chapter: Well, Tomorrow Came

I love this story! I'm totally favoriting it. You're a good writer!

Author's Response: Wow, that's one of the nicest comments I've ever gotten! Thanks!

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