Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 01/11/07 19:47
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

oh , i like this one. i hope you'll be writing more soon, i can't wait for the rest! :D

Author's Response: I'm almost done with Chapter 2!

Reviewer: Marauders_Girls
Date: 01/10/07 22:36
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

uh oh!!! that was fuuny! i like sirius's dare he sooooooooo cant do that!

Author's Response: Well, we'll see who follows through!

Reviewer: Transcendence
Date: 01/10/07 6:17
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Can't wait to see what happens next, update ASAP! :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, hopefully you won't have to wait long!

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/10/07 0:25
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Wow I really like where this story is going! I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Lots of people have been saying that...... I am slowly overcoming writer's block.

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 01/09/07 20:37
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! She's got to take that dare! I love this!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!

Reviewer: Awakening16
Date: 01/09/07 18:55
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

oooh interesting very interesting!

Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad it's interesting!

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 01/09/07 14:21
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Uh-oh truth or dare. Excuse me, I forgot the double dare. :) Whats going to happen next?

Author's Response: Read on if you want to know what happens. Read on!

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 01/09/07 10:50
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

that is SUCH a cliff-hanger, you have GOT to write more!

Author's Response: Yes, there's nothing like an evil cliff-hanger to start things off.

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 01/08/07 16:35
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Ooh, I like where this is going! Heehee! Update soon!! =) --RP

Author's Response: I will! Don't worry, I will slowly overcome writer's block.

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 01/08/07 15:28
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Ooh, lala!

I'm feeling really unconstructive at the moment, so I can't leave a lot of concrit, but I really liek where this story is going t,eh character development, and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I totally understand that. I'm glad you like it enough to attempt a review!

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 01/07/07 19:28
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Gee, they've really got a pick on Lily, haven't they?

This was cute. It reminded me of my school days when I used to play this, not for points though.

Anyway, cute start. I'm sure this will progress to some really interesting situations.

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Lily. Don't worry, she'll get her turn soon enough.

Reviewer: silverstrand1
Date: 01/07/07 19:02
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

If I say it again will it go faster?

Author's Response: Actually, yes. The more positives I get from my readers, the more inspired I am to work faster!

Reviewer: zarielona
Date: 01/07/07 18:50
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

loved it... more more!!!

Author's Response: More should be up soon! I promise.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 01/07/07 17:39
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

omg--im cringing for more
write more soon
i'll be waiting for chapter 2 obsessively.
jk, but hurry up. it was awesome!

Author's Response: I'm trying to hurry. Writer's blcok is in the way, but I get little pieces to add on at random moments.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 01/07/07 16:24
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

“So? What will it be, Lily? Truth, Dare, or Double Dare?” Jessie asked again.

“I’ll take another Double Dare.”

“I was hoping you’d say that.” Jessie had a sly grin on her face. From the look on Sirius’ face, he and his girlfriend had something planned. “Lily, I Double Dare you to kiss James Potter, on the lips, for at least ten seconds.”

*snickers* James and Lily, sitting in a tree...Then comes Harry in the baby carriage!!!! 10/10

Author's Response: lol. I'm planning to have a little J/L action, but the main gocus will be on the game. I'll try to advance their relationship with Dares and Truths.

Reviewer: kelly_58
Date: 01/07/07 16:12
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

love it! please update!

Author's Response: Whoops. I wonder why my resonse was submitted twice in the last review.

Reviewer: kelly_58
Date: 01/07/07 16:12
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

love it! please update!

Author's Response: Thank You! Chapter 2 is half way done, but I have hit a writer's block.

Author's Response: Thank You! Chapter 2 is half way done, but I have hit a writer's block.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 01/07/07 15:55
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Glad this was up so quickly! Really well done-i think your writing is great and i love this as a first chapter to get you interested! Looking forward to the next!
Phily :)

Author's Response: I hoped that this one would hook people. I hope that the next one will keep them reading.

Reviewer: quidditchlover
Date: 01/07/07 15:49
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

ooooooh, lovin it already!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank You! I never imagined that this would get such a positive response.

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 01/07/07 15:14
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

“That’s low, Sirius, even for you.”
“Who said I was high?” asked Sirius in mock confusion.

*giggles* Great line. *huggles Sirius*
This was a good beginning, quite entertaining! Roughly how old are the Marauders here? They seemed around fifteen/sixteen-ish...just curious. Anyhow, nice work!

Author's Response: Yeah, I was thinking 6th/7th year for them. Thanks for the compliments, I'm starting to worry that the next chapter won't live up! That's my favorite line too!

Author's Response: I just relized, if I want to have any Lily/James action, it will have to be seventh year.

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