Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 01/25/07 21:32
Chapter: Round 2

I can't wait to see McGonagal's face when there's a bunny, a clown, and a wild llama in her class!!!!

Author's Response: That's the idea!

Reviewer: cAughtonFire
Date: 01/25/07 17:08
Chapter: Round 2

i love it so far!! update soon!! i can't wait!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 01/25/07 12:00
Chapter: Round 2

Great fan fic!!
I can't wait to see how they all pull of their dares!!
Cont Soon!!

Author's Response: Chapter 3 and maybe a little bit of chapter 4 they will pull off their dares. It should be funny.

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 01/25/07 10:07
Chapter: Round 2

The dares were pretty funny, and James was really nice to Lily. And no major cliffhanger this time, yippie!


Author's Response: Yeah, I thought I wrap-up would be nice here. Laura, got it.

Reviewer: SevenAndMoreToGo
Date: 01/25/07 0:54
Chapter: Round 2

Better than last time, loved it! Funny for a non-funny chapter. Can't wait for their next day at school!

Author's Response: Thanks! Lots of people have said that this chapter was better.

Reviewer: SevenAndMoreToGo
Date: 01/25/07 0:53
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Nice, funny fic..slightly abrupt in the starting. It would be great if you could add a bit more description - i know you'd say "description, what description!" but my humour fic had the same problem too and now after description it seems funnier than before.

The characterization was good, the story didn't seem OOC in any sense. Keep going on, I'm waiting for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to stay true to the original characters, but I had to inflate their personality just a tad.

Reviewer: Goldenfire101
Date: 01/24/07 21:54
Chapter: Round 2

heheheh. funny for a non-funny chappie. I love it!

Author's Response: I'm really glad I thought it was funny!

Reviewer: Goldenfire101
Date: 01/24/07 21:10
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

NICE. 10.

Author's Response: Wow! I 10 and 5 stars in one day! Whoo!

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 01/24/07 21:04
Chapter: Round 2

Cute and funny.

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually didn't think it was that funny myself.

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins
Date: 01/24/07 20:58
Chapter: Round 2

oh, its awesome, but will it turn to romance? that'd be great. 5 stars.

Author's Response: Probably not very much. I'm terrible at writing romance.

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 01/24/07 18:50
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

~the priya
'just because'

Author's Response: Is that a good "ooooohhh!!!"? I hope so!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 01/24/07 16:09
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE GOT TO SEE THIS. ;-) Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I am so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/24/07 15:47
Chapter: Round 2

Llamas, haha. Lily had to work to not melt when she kissed James. Soon, well maybe not so soon they'll be in love with each other! Well they already love each other but Lily will realise it. :D

Frank and Alice, they seem so happy. I can't wait for the next update, and thank you for being my second beta! =D

Author's Response: Your welcome! I actually have a friend whose nickname is llama, this is to mention her a little bit. Several of my friends will be in later.

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 01/24/07 15:26
Chapter: Round 2

Great Chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 01/24/07 15:17
Chapter: Round 2

Well done for chapter 2! :D Glad it's up here and everyone is enjoying the chapter! Just a tiny tip, you might want to use the
tags at the beginning of your story text to separate the author's note and the story. I know it can get a little confusing! Great writing once again and looking forward to the next chapter!

Phily :)

Author's Response: Thanks! There was a sperrating line in the preview when I submitted it, I dunno what happened to it.

Reviewer: Coozey
Date: 01/24/07 14:38
Chapter: Round 2

my favourite game + a hp ff!!
please please please post another chapter soon!!
sound good so far!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Is it really your favorite game?

Reviewer: scotlandizdabest
Date: 01/24/07 14:31
Chapter: Round 2

That was actully really good! I preffered it to the last chapter! Well done and your deafinately getting better at writeing! xx

Author's Response: Thanks! I have learned a lot.

Reviewer: scotlandizdabest
Date: 01/24/07 14:30
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Hey not bad story!!! Can't wait to read next one!!! xx

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to make it good!

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 01/23/07 16:56
Chapter: Round 2

Hey I can make a reveiw before the chapter comes our COOL!!! LOL! Now why doesn't it hurry up so I can actully reveiw the chapter! 1...2...3! Nope i thought that would work for sure! Darn!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think that's strange. Make sure you actually reviwe the chapter!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 01/23/07 3:32
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

That was a fantastic chapter! I love where this is going. Very funny! Can't wait for the next chapter to get validated.

Author's Response: It's validated!!! Thank you for the compliments, I really appreciate them!

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