Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 03/06/07 15:06
Chapter: Round 2

I liked it. It definitly wasn't as good as the first though. I'm sorry. :-(

Author's Response: That's alright. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and this one (even if it wasn't as good) :)

Reviewer: purebloodprincess25
Date: 02/28/07 10:16
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 02/28/07 2:45
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Heehee! I love this story. Very clever and funny. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks you for the compliments! They make me happy.

Reviewer: love_is_torture
Date: 02/25/07 2:22
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

I like your story, I hope yo update it soon =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 02/23/07 3:49
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Another amazing chapter! it was great! do you think you could put in a truth for me? My name is Jennifer, I'm a Ravenclaw and ask her who she has a crush on! Then her answer is Todd P. And then they kiss... OK, you dont have to put the last bit in! But could you do it?

Author's Response: Sure, I can do it! I'm not sure if I can put on the kissing part tho. I'm sorry if it doesn't make it in.

Reviewer: Felton_Fan_For_Life
Date: 02/22/07 22:05
Chapter: Taking it to the School

HaHa, very nice. This is getting really good! Update sooooon!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments!

Reviewer: NikkiBly
Date: 02/22/07 14:04
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Love it, keep em coming!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hp_bookworm
Date: 02/20/07 18:18
Chapter: Taking it to the School

lol great chapter! can't wait to see what happens in the room of requirement...

Author's Response: Thanks! It should be interesting....

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/20/07 17:40
Chapter: Taking it to the School

By the way, I would be ecstatic if you could have someone ask me (Schmergo, Hufflepuff, fluffy hair) a truth, a really stupid truth with a bizarre answer. Like, "What scares you the most?" and the answer would be something like, "realtors' or 'giraffes' or 'pineapples' or 'platypuses' or something. It would be great if you could think up a rational explanation for my bizarre answer!

Author's Response: Okay. That is a very specific requeset. I look forward to incorperating it into my story!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/20/07 17:33
Chapter: Taking it to the School

It is incredibly confusing that there's an Anna and an Ana! But that's okay, it's probably just my poor, sad little mind playing tricks on me. I love McGonagall in this chapter-- for some reason, her serious-ness is hysteical-- and the llama cracked me up. I literally laughed out loud!

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm incredibly sorry about the Anna, Ana thing. I guess I've gotten so used to it over the years, I underestimated how confusing it can be. :p I'm glad you laughed!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/20/07 17:31
Chapter: Round 2

Aw, James is so sweet! I love the way you got into Lily's head like that, and the wild llama was hysterical. I'm thinking of getting my friends to play "Truth, Dare, Or Double Dare" as well!

Author's Response: I know. I loved writing that sweet side of James. I also enjoyed characterizing Lily in her head. Thank you for all of the compliments!!!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/20/07 17:29
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Oh dear! This should be interesting! I like your not-totally-pathetic Peter (yay, he's actually funny and not repulsive!), although I do sort of wish that we could see more of Lily's sense of humour... she's a very fun character, and in a lot of fics, she's portrayed as the angry, straight-laced one. Still, I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I hate it in fics when Peter is dorky and stupid. He was a marauder for a reason. More of a funny Lily, got it. Thank you!

Reviewer: ron_hermione_DUH
Date: 02/20/07 15:38
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Ths is awsome! I LOVE the llama!!! llamas are the best!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, they are.

Reviewer: piperpayton22
Date: 02/20/07 5:41
Chapter: Taking it to the School

omg i love this fan fic its the best you have to update fast i love the part about james being sweat and lily kissing him oh i love it

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it so much! Thank you for all of the compliments!

Reviewer: unfortunateorphan13
Date: 02/18/07 19:15
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Awesome!!! I like the story so far it needs more chapters but its very good!!
Keep up the writing and updating!! WOOT!
With All Due Respect,
unfortunate orphan13
p.s. Do you happen to know where I can find a gentlemen named Waldo?!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! (That is quit a lot of smilies!:) ) I'm sorry, but I too have trouble finding Waldo.

Reviewer: azul
Date: 02/17/07 18:49
Chapter: Taking it to the School

this is cool. It has potential. keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Wee!

Author's Response: Wee!

Reviewer: azul
Date: 02/17/07 18:48
Chapter: Taking it to the School

this is cool. It has potential. keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Thespidermanblanket
Date: 02/17/07 10:35
Chapter: Taking it to the School

haha! excellent!


Author's Response: Thnak you!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 02/17/07 10:08
Chapter: Taking it to the School

Oooooh, I so can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 02/16/07 19:16
Chapter: Taking it to the School

I'm not exactly sure whether to be honored or angry that I'm being made to read a book for twelve hours straight. LOL. :P

Anyhow, very funny chapter, although I don't really think McGonagall would have tolerated the llama -- she would have probably transfigured it into some small object, or something. But, it made for an entertaining read, so...

Author's Response: I think you should fell honored! lol Actually, that never even occured to me. She probably would of....

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