Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/13/07 18:44
Chapter: With Just Two Words

I like how it rhymes, and the idea that two words can kill so easily. *shivers* Not that killing is a good thing, but you really captured its essence here. Good job!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Note: I actually did something like that in one of my fics! I think it went:
A simple thing, only two words

Fell on your ears, wrought death,

Said with the voice of death itself.

Weird how we both had that idea...great job on this fic!

Reviewer: Tagidi Riva
Date: 01/09/07 0:23
Chapter: With Just Two Words

Beautiful poem, I really love the tone.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I very much appreciate it.

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