Nice. This was entertaining. I noticed in your first review that the POV changes were found confusing, but I actually liked them. You introduced each character as you changed. I thought it was well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Elle! *huggles* This was actually one of my first poems, so it's nice to hear that someone likes it. :)
*sniff* Yeah, I want them to get together too...you're looking at a huge Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny shipper here....
I was just a bit confused as the point of view changed in some places, but otherwise, great job!
The abbreviations of Dumbledore (Dumby) and Voldemort (Voldy) always crack me up for some reason...
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Woot! H/G R/Hr all the way! :) About the POV changes... the first stanza was Harry to Ginny, the second was Ron to Hermione, and the third was Malfoy to Moaning Myrtle. The fourth stanza was just a little summary. :)
Author's Response: OMG, I'm so sorry! When I answered your review I was thinking of a completely different poem of mine that many people were having trouble understanding. This poem was actually Ginny's POV, then Hermione's POV, and then a little summary. Wow, once again, I'm so sorry!