Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/06/07 21:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow.. I found it hard to follow at time but that may just be caused by lack of sleep. I thought this was really good and your portrayed all their emtions really well. I liekd it, yes I did...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry if it was confusing, and I'm glad you appreciated the characterisation.

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