Reviewer: smilingturtle
Date: 03/16/07 22:55
Chapter: The Ballad

i loved it

Reviewer: GryffindorGoddess
Date: 01/15/07 20:47
Chapter: The Ballad

Very well written! I'm a firm believer that Snape is a good character and you do him justice in this poem. I'm glad you decided to submit this poem! Good luck in the challenge, fellow ballad writer! :) ~GG

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/11/07 15:15
Chapter: The Ballad

This is a very good submission! Your rhythm is excellent and the rhyming is generally solid. Also it was a clever decision to choose Snape and Draco. Good Luck with the challenge!

Reviewer: Lily of the US
Date: 01/06/07 21:35
Chapter: The Ballad

Hmm. A different side of Snape that I never would have considered before. You did a great job with the poetry as well. Good luck with the contest!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 01/05/07 15:55
Chapter: The Ballad

Hi Kim!
Wow, that was fast, this challenge just went up! You must have been inspired. ;) I like it alot, you did a great job with the prompt. I also like that this Snape is loyal to Dumbledore (I think so too!) This was a good idea for a ballad, and a great title. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks Gina! Like I said in the summary, I RARELY write poetry and I almost never share it, but I'll be darned if this didn't write itself! Thanks for your kind comments. :-)

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