Reviews For You Remembered
Reviewer: bluemoon13
Date: 11/18/07 16:33
Chapter: You Remembered

That was so sweet! A unique take on Harry/Ginny. Well done!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it - and took the time to leave such a sweet review. <3

Reviewer: Ginny H Potter
Date: 09/12/07 7:54
Chapter: You Remembered

REALLY CREATIVE

Author's Response: :D Thanks! I'm super-glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: gabby_____rainbow
Date: 08/20/07 10:05
Chapter: You Remembered

*Gasp* Wow! That's so sweet, I cried! You are such an amazing author, I can see why so many people put you as their favourite author (including harry_victoria!!). Definitley on my favourite list!!! *~gabby*~

Author's Response: Oh, goodness, thank you so, so much! I'm really glad you liked the story. (And I <3 harry_victoria! :D) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Iagus
Date: 08/03/07 17:32
Chapter: You Remembered

I loved it, and I think the length works just fine.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I agree with you - I think the story's quite finished. Sequels are nice, but not always. :D Thanks again for the nice review! <3

Reviewer: Germa
Date: 07/31/07 17:09
Chapter: You Remembered

holy, that was the wierdest thing Ive ever read! OMG!!!!!!!!!
that was sooooooooo random!@hotmail.com

Author's Response: haha, ummm.... thanks? :P

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 07/19/07 10:16
Chapter: You Remembered

While reading this, I was like, 'Ginny cares about him so much, it's almost too much for me to handle'. I seriously thought that this was the best 'Ginny cares about Harry so much that...' fic ever. Do you have any suggestions for a new MNFF writer like myself? PS. Do you beta? Awesome job! :)

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Ginny's devotion was a bit overwhelming, wasn't it? But in a good way, of course :D and I'm glad you enjoyed it. So... advice... It may sound kinda lame, but what helps me the most is practice. I like to spend a certain amount of time every day writing, and the more I produce, the better and better it gets. (And when I say practice, just dive in and start writing a story right away!) And of course, read as much as you can get your hands on! :D Another idea I just recently stumbled upon: if you're ever struggling for an idea for a fanfiction, read some of the editorials on Mugglenet - there are some truly original ideas there (but if you use one, I would give the author credit!). And actually, I DO beta, but only one-shots. If you'd like me to beta something for you, just let me know! (I have a thread up in the Beta Guild: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1445) <3

Reviewer: HarryPotterLover_01
Date: 07/16/07 18:58
Chapter: You Remembered

wow this is really really sad!
poor harry! he doesnt deserve that *tear* you did a great job writing this it was wonderful!
i look forward to reading other works by u in the future!
Charlene

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I know - poor Harry! I even wanted to cry while writing it. :'( I'm glad you liked it, though, and hope you enjoy some of my other fics! <3

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 04/30/07 17:06
Chapter: You Remembered

keep going!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. If I could think of anything else decent to continue the story, I would definitely write a sequel, because it's just so sweet! :D Thanks again. <3

Reviewer: hansangel93
Date: 04/25/07 20:27
Chapter: You Remembered

that was great! keep writing!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! :D

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/04/07 8:38
Chapter: You Remembered

I'm glad that Harry can remember who Ginny is and stuff but I don't like how he can't remember defeating Voldemort and pretty important events like that. After all, Harry IS the boy who lived...defeator of voldy...he should know what happened...

Author's Response: Oh, I agree that those things are important, but I just wanted to emphasize how important the more personal aspects of his life are. I think it's easy to see Harry as JUST the boy who lived and forget that he's human, too.

Reviewer: stareywomen
Date: 01/22/07 17:06
Chapter: You Remembered

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!! <3

Reviewer: bite
Date: 01/13/07 7:29
Chapter: You Remembered

Very good story. It would have been even better if you had made this a chaptered story.

Author's Response: You know, I had actually considered that in the early stages of writing... it was quite a monstrous one-shot, huh? :P Glad you liked it, though!

Reviewer: Littlejenbear
Date: 01/11/07 9:37
Chapter: You Remembered

This is a very good story. I thought it was nice and you're a good writter

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it. <3 Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kabob
Date: 01/09/07 21:41
Chapter: You Remembered

Wow... what an incredible story! I'm not just saying that either, this is extraordinary work. The plot line was so original and refreshing; I wasn't expecting anything like this, so that's a big plus right off the bat.

As for the emotions and such, they were done perfectly. I could really sympathize with how Ginny was feeling at the start, with all her 'motherly' burdens, and later on with the pity she felt for Harry, and her mature decision to do something about it by creating new joyful memories. Well, not that I've ever been in that situation; it's that you portrayed it so well!

You're a great writer; I hope to read more of your work soon :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I swear, you just made my day. :D I love experimenting with characters in "different" circumstances, and I'm so glad to hear that it works. <3 Thanks again.

Reviewer: rachelprue
Date: 01/07/07 18:22
Chapter: You Remembered

Very cute little story. I think you should write more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing! <3

Reviewer: rachelprue
Date: 01/07/07 18:21
Chapter: You Remembered

Very cute little story. I think you should write more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 01/07/07 16:49
Chapter: You Remembered

Awwwwww....

Rereading this makes it so much more touching. Tears have actually formed in my eyes (of course, I'm listening to the song "Chasing Cars", which is rather sad).

Thanks to Winged Artemis, for being a wonderful friend, beta, and prompt-giver for the Ravenclaw fic exchange.
*gets all warm and fuzzy* Awwwwww....

He looked a bit confused, but he answered, Yes. Im killing bugs.
That part somehow was really emotionally effective. The childishness of the statement was extremely touching.

The use of "like a mother" was an excellent description; it's a very nice way to put how Ginny treated him. It showed how she thought of herself and how she acted - it gave me a reflection on the H/G relationship, and the situation.

she remembered with startling clarity how it felt to be young, how it felt to giggle behind school books, how it felt to be love and be loved and, being young... to be left behind.
That's deep. I felt the heat rising in me, and the rush of the intense meaning of "young". Being young is something that people can never bring back. Parents and adults never conceive it again... you can have it... and it's gone.

The tiny crystals fell like moonlit stars onto her cheeks, and one by one, they melted.
Excellent description! When you said moonlit stars, I could see the fluttery twinkle of the falling snow, and the melting flakes.

If they could not relive the past, Ginny decided, they would have to create new memories. Though people and places and all the particulars had been lost, Ginny knew that Harry remembered loving her, and such a memory could live on indefinitely, and they could let the rest slide into history as they began a new life together. Love had kept him going this long, and love would hold them together for a very, very long time.
That paragraph is really poignant. It's a very nice closing sentence - it's like, all of this cutting and decorating and then a final pasting.

This was perfect amount of frosting - not too much, not too little - for the lovely slice of cake you've fed me. Thanks a million!

Author's Response: Awwww... again! :P You are too sweet, do you know that? :D I'm just thrilled that you really liked the story. <3 x a bunch

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