Reviews For Wishes
Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 12/01/07 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Am I right in thinking that it is Merope? I think that your storys are amazing! I am fascinated by how you can get inside there heads, it allows you to relate to the characters that normally you arent able to relate to. Congratulations!

Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 12/01/07 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Am I right in thinking that it is Merope? I think that your storys are amazing! I am fascinated by how you can get inside there heads, it allows you to relate to the characters that normally you arent able to relate to. Congratulations!

Reviewer: AllFairInLoveOrWar
Date: 12/01/07 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww,it's Merope isn't it? I never looked at her side of the story like that. Very sweet,I love the end.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 11/25/07 1:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. I really, really enjoyed this fic! Merope's (it was her, wasn't it?) feelings and longings were so realistic and so touching! I especially loved her thoughts about what a mother should be like - her feelings of inferiority are so sad, and so understandable here. This fic was really great, and the ending was lovely in it's ambiguity (though the reader of course knows what comes next). Really a great one-shot!

Reviewer: Breaking Dawn
Date: 11/19/07 1:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wait... Wait... I know this. It's Merope, isn't it?
She knocks, since she remembers that that is what one does with doors, and waits.
I think that this is the saddest line. It just shows her despair, and desolation, and how long she' s been away from proper civilization - it's amazing.
Also, I liked the baby shoes bit. I've never really felt bad for Merope before - assuming that's who she is - but now I really, really feel for her.
Another line I really liked was She thinks that maybe, a dry-dust eternity ago, she might have known, but now she has forgotten it forever. I thought that the dry-dust eternity was good.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/21/07 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Is it...uh...Merope? I'm just guessing, but she's the only one I know that ever ended up like that, and I don't want to say that this is either Ginny or Hermione, because I don't think they'd end up like this - they know what they are going to do in life, and they have friends and family to support them. Merope didn't, so I'm guessing her.

This is a very touching, sad piece. I like the last line the best, though all your descriptions are wonderful, and seem very true and real and just amazing.

She knockes, since she remembers that that is what one does with doors... This struck me as very desolate and despairing - it really got the point across (if that is the point) in a simple way other than saying she felt desolate. Good job!

Overall great description - I think you did great with this one shot, and would be great with others. Maybe even a poem will get past you, since you have such a way with words...

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: You are absolutly right! I am so glad that I got the Merope point across for one person...and yes, "she knocks, since she remembers that that is what one does with doors..." was meant to be disparing. It was also meant to show what little sense of humanity and society she has left. P.S. LOVE William Blake!

Reviewer: ginny_potter72
Date: 01/06/07 21:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

i dont get it...who is it...i think it is ginny...but i dont know for sure...pls tell me...its driving me crazy...beautiful... luved it... 10/10


Author's Response: It was actually supposed to be Merope Riddle (Gaunt)....thanks for telling me that you didn't get it! The feedback really helps my writing.

Reviewer: nysuperstarz
Date: 01/05/07 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh! I loved it! It was wonderfully written and the imagery was fantastic! Great Job, hun!

~Roop

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 01/04/07 18:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow... that was really sad. After reading it I don't think I could really imagine her situation any different from this... Lost and not really knowing how to get what she wishes, but still wishing... Now I can't imagine her any other way! Great one-shot.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/04/07 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sigh* This was so unhappy and I've read it three times. Call me stupid, but I don't know who it is.

Author's Response: You are NOT stupid...in fact, this was just the type of review I was looking for, so thanks! (It was actually Merope Riddle/Gaunt)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Skeletons' Tale by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
"A rose by any other name would smell as sweet," wrote Shakespeare. This story...
Autumn At The Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The 'treat' of autumn's glorious beauty is inevitably follow by the 'trick'...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
FEATURED
Five Christmases by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
It took four Christmases for Andromeda Black and Ted Tonks to get together...
Coming Alive by The owl 6th-7th Years
Leanne Gamp hadn't wanted to be at that party, even though it was Christmas...
Graves by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
In December of 1997, Harry visits his parents' graves in Godric's Hollow and...
CATEGORIES